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verse 1: Paranoid
Hook: Prahject
verse 2: Yung red
hook: Prahject
verse 3: Paranoid
hook: Prahject

LINKS: (fuck you for closing my other thread you faggot)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235801
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3090423

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Uppin..Yall did nice verses...got that hook righ i know yall know that catchy haha thats whhasup...

Para lemme give u some feed - ya shit much more bumpable...alot more flow...alot less monotonous, more fluctuations flow was on...felt tha adlibs u did...keep it going

Red - nice shit, flow a lil off...delivery aight...yah dubbs was off dawg cudnt understand it all dawg..other than that str8

Prah - lol ...

word g luck wit tha show 2moro

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....suck a dick faggot.....

listnin---beat ight...........kinda boring for me but still decent......
para flow comes in.......flows steady .....delevering it cool...........voice is werkin well wit tthis beat........
adlibs was ehh for me....didnt really like em.........aahah at prah wit that hook datz hot boi........feelin dat shit fer real........
i already gave my feed on this guy and its pretty much tha same.....his voice werks better on this track...but he fell off too many times...so thumbsdown for him.....
k para again...........flows good on this verse fell off a lil at tha first.......
but got it back quikly this was an ight track,,,......my fav part ad to be prahz hook coulda been turned up a tiny bit but shit was still hot boi......so not a bad drop exept for red im not really feelin him all that much.....bu8t tha rest was str8 fam good ish and return tha favour on summin of mine.....ceck exposing tha industry

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not my fault it took you over 12 hours to post 2 links

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mannn you MADD upped ya game paranoid!!!!

i would leave more feed but i gotta get shit sorted.peace bruv

BTW

Wuttup Prahject!!!1

fuck you, I always get my links ready. you should know that bitch what! lol jk. uppin....

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para- yeah, like prahject said, it was less monitone, doppest i heard from u... second verse addlibs pretty cool... "call me a jerk" didn't like how u said that sounded corney
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chorus- might be a lil quiet, but im diggin, could us like a better reverb echo thang to make it catchier.
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young red- fell off a bit... need to really ennunciate your rhyming words and dub 'em or w/e... decent thought, like ya style ya pressance just aint there yet

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idk i jsut listened to a bit of your verse
you sounded really loud

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def. feelin the vibe of the beat

para came consisten...nothing out of the ordinary...everything flowed well

Intermental...fit on the hook...sounds a lil young for the beat tho (no hate)

2nd cat...could have a dope voice if he upped the delivery


Not a bad track fellas


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This is a decent track

the beat sounds like it some old school r&b song its mad hot i love this beat you gotta hook me up with this beat

Paranoid you came pretty came pretty nice on this.....I was quite suprized actually you upped yoru game..i think you should try to work on ur rhyme scheme and the way you say ur words cuz it doesn't seem like your putting to much emphasis in your rhymes

THE SHOVEL MAN LOL you did a nice job on the hook.....some real smooth shit i was feeling that

Second dude Young REd or whatever wasn't that bad but he fell off hard in the last part of his verse dudes def. got some potential.

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upppin...........

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i like the beat choice and i respect ya monotone style but everyonce in a while some voice fluctuation would be nice main the hook fit and fit well second flow voice is cool seems like to many words at times ..alll in all good shit keep doin it paranoid.....

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para u elevated word u dont sound so choppy n shit dubs n adlibs was coo lyrics was coo too gud job man hook comes in kinda lower then the verses needs to be upped dude comes in coo adlibs is cool flows went off a couple times delivery was coo second verse was coo too on ur verses u needa get more emotion tho try different things n shit hook is cool jus needs to be upped overall nice track man jus need keep workin on smoothin ya flow out

Listening...

Beat is nice. Feelin it.

Paranoid...damn man. Good work...you really elevated. Very bumpable...loving it. Flow is tight. Props man...quality sounds pretty good too.

Hook...pretty nice shit.

Second verse...pretty nice. Flow was pretty good...decent shit.

Hook is nice again.

Para...another nice verse.

Good shit. A nice track. Keep it up.

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