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08-15-04, 05:36 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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..::Sinister::.. vs natedogg
IP: CEF5 716F
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20 lines max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: u hate G. W. Bush and is going to shoot him in the middle of a parade wuts going on in ur head Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-15-04 at 07:36 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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08-15-04, 05:46 PM
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IP: B41A A5BC
natedogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 05:46 PM.
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08-15-04, 05:55 PM
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IP: B41A A5BC
its not like im walkin alone into the shadow of death stand beside one another cause it aint over yet and id be willing to bet that if u dont back down you and ill be the ones that are holing the crown in the end when its over you will say hell no but its only the begun so pick me for your crew and ill be the only one to fight this to i win i am on the frontlines so do u feel me i bet u do so pick me i am the ever best and no one can stop that cuz i just begun and i am now done
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08-15-04, 07:08 PM
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IP: CEF5 716F
..::Sinister::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 07:08 PM.
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08-15-04, 07:58 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: CEF5 716F
topic: u hate G. W. Bush and is going to shoot him in the middle of a parade wuts going on in ur head
I control this bitches fate right here all in my hands.... Could kill him wit the most dangerous weapon made by man... Right now mah dessert eagle is well hidden in my pocket... Shyt, Im only 40 feet away, I might as well pull the cocket... But nah I shouldn't do it yet cuz i got a master plan... Its 2 get close n shoot w/ out missin, do u understand... Imma shoot him twice in the leg n one time in the head... Shoot a couple gaurds, shoot him agen 2 know he's dead.. This shyt is crazy, wen i do it everyones already seen me... But who gives a damn, Shyt atleast imma be on T.V. But im still nervous, cuz wut imma do is really murderous.... Well he sed he'll help 6-50 but the worlds never heard of us... Yes, the times soon gonna come, my hearts hella beating... Im only 10 feet away, take out mah gun, Shyt! he's leaving... How the hell am I gonna kill him now, I just lost a my chance... I had hella lucky times to kill his ass and now I just cant... wut the hell! I dont care shyt imma just go bust all out... And hope to get atleast one shot in his ass or mouth.. I took my couple shots, and now he's all in the ground... Everyones screaming, and all i hear is madness all around... Im a gonner already, shyt imma jst go and do suicide... Imma shoot mah self in the head and hopefully I died.. |
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08-15-04, 07:59 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
lol, wth???? did u even rhyme?? no ur not in the crew, and man plz elevate before u battle agen
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08-15-04, 08:06 PM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
Sinister...nice drop man, love the suicide ending, you could feel the tention the whole time you read the verse....very nice, good flow, good structure and nice rhymes...very nice natedogg - did you even write a topical??? it sounded more like a crew tryout, im very confused at what you put down.... structure and flow - sinister wordplay and rhymes - sinister v/sinister please drop an honest vote on my battle please as i have dropped one on yours http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142615 |
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08-15-04, 08:15 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
thanx..uppin
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08-15-04, 08:38 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
up up and awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
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08-16-04, 12:40 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
didnt really like tha topic but sinister got dis purely on effort. his flow was off at times but u could tell he wanted it more PS: ill drop my verse today sinister on our battle please vote on this cuz niggas is not appreciatin tha flow! demon pyrokronix vs typical and dustyblunted vs typical! thanx guys
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08-16-04, 12:45 PM
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This was feedback posted for ..::Sinister::..
IP: 52C7 AD22
DUDE THIS SUCKED < THE WHOLE THREAD SUCKED
SHOULD HAVE BEEN ABOUT KILLING KERRY AND EDWARDS I HATE LITTLE KIDS WHO THINK THEY KNOW SUMTHING ABOUT SUMTHInG YOU STAYED ON TOPIC ATLEAST< I DONT KNOW WHAT THE OTHER DUDE WAS YAPPIN BOUT BUT THIS IS THE WORST BATTLE I HAVE EVER READ ONE
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08-16-04, 01:25 PM
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The Next Level
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IP: 9772 E3C3
Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
nice verse, good punches, flow and structure, used good vocab as well. good verse. nate, do you even know what rhyme means? nuff said. |
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08-16-04, 01:58 PM
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: DF46 9FBC
Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
ok simple sinister got this his verse was just that and much betta elevate both sinister got this wit almost all the catigory ote you know who
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08-16-04, 02:23 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Voted For: ..::Sinister::..
Once again Natedogg takes a verse he prewrote for some entirely different occasion and uses it in a battle. The first time he took a verse he directed at Red Bull, now it seems as though he's using a verse he used to audition for a crew...Sin, good stuff, the only suggestion I can give you is to battle an original topical MC. God story depiction and structure, keep doin' ya thing. Nate, I could tell you the same, but your "thing" is pussying out of my challenges, man up bitch. Vote - ..::Sinister::..
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