Da sand (ressurected)

1. I rose from the sand
now my forms another man
2. come equipped with pistols gripped
houdini gin in my hand
3. your spits are faker than two sides of a counterfeit dime
you know who your are, rapin forums to jot a rhyme
4. I dont think you know who you fuckin with
my knuckles swell and trigger digits itch when gone off of that fifth
5. now that youv'e crossed me motherfucka
pray to god and die nameless
6. unloadin chambers sendin hoes to hell
dropped in shame and faceless
7. my behavior is ripped
cuz my brain is krunked
8. im killin bitches burnin cars with liscense plates in my trunk


Hook

[ the uniforms will never catch us ]
though they label me infectious
stay the fuck away from me when all my hatred's ressurected

think their g' s rollin a lexus
they got boys from k to texas
never fuck around with niggaz know for hookin up connections

crash and burn but never wreck us
ressurected back in seconds
goin mad with foes in bitches tryin to put me out with tech's

and you will see that smokin cannibus
and stakin out them paper cuts will
put your out on top
[ even more then life corrections does. ]



if ne one wanna spit the other verse hit me up. peace

lol, your flow is pretty gud, and you fit the internal's in. the only thing i would say is:

1. i doubt your gangster, or even a person who owns a gun, ur netceeing
2. elavate your vocabulary
3. stop watching the hip hop videos on tv
4. go out and buy sum underground artists albums, and study there rhymes
5. read all the tutorials you can find on the internet

you have potential, hit me up on aim - ayura123 or msn messenger - oxigin1@hotmail.com and ill tutor ya.