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Old 05-01-07, 01:28 AM   #1
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Took Track Down Closed~ postin some new in a lil thanks for feedback, thats why i love this site u get feedback rather quick. GOOD LOOKS

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Old 05-01-07, 02:50 AM   #2
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listening

the beat is....interesting, i guess. Aint really my tip, but i can bump to this.

Your quality is Meh,...your flow is decent, but your adlibs are sort of off at the beginning. your voice is straight, should put more emotion into this. this is the type where you need to let it loose and i dont think you did that on this tracc, your pronounciation is ok. The lyrics are good i can feel where your coming from. Some real serious type tracc here.

overall 5/10

put more emotion and better quality and its a wrap

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Old 05-01-07, 03:52 AM   #3
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alright these kind of beats are getting played out and are annoying. you kind of sound like socrates a little. Your emotion is lackin' and i'm not beleiving what your sayin' it sounds like you just put it together because you wanted to make the song..its not your lyrics are bad its just the way your spitting it is what makes me feel like you lacked on that. Quality is about sub-par for your internet rapper so about average. You have a flow like Troublesome...thats what you remind me of sept your voice isn't as raspy.......overall this is just not hitten......Just add some more emotion and delivery...then it'd be decent
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Old 05-01-07, 12:53 PM   #4
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ur shit is ight......flow is decent emotion is ight kinda sounds like u whisperin in the mic.....this beat is annoying i hate those mouse voices .....i like ur voice its coo but im not sure if im likein the flow sounds the same through out overall this was real coo i liked this shit....next time u should put effort on doin ur own hook.....beats wit hooks is played.....u stay up
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Old 05-01-07, 02:28 PM   #5
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the link aint workin.....says "no such song"

u delete the track or somthin?
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Old 05-01-07, 11:15 PM   #6
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yea took it down to work on it, if i new how to delete posts i would.
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