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12-14-03, 09:09 AM | #1 | ||||||
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"sometimes" FIRE!!!!!!!plz check
IP: 3ADC 323F
ok this is my first time doing this
Produced by: Postman Arranged by: Postman Verse1: cream - chorus/second verse cannibus - verse3: cassidy this beat is free so if you want to spit over it holla at me. Sometimes: http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767243&q=hi http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767243&q=lo if you just wanna bang the instrumental Sometimes (instrumental) http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767256&q=lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=767256&q=hi feedback is appreciated. |
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12-14-03, 10:55 AM | #2 | |||||||
Ya Mama's Favorite
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IP: DAF8 40B5
Imma be honest with you cuz, it won;t make you beter me lying to you....
As far as the instumental, I wasn't feeling it. It sound more like a R&B track than a hip-hop song..which brings me too I dont; know why you would put sombody as hard as Canibus on a beat liek that, I mean.....Its not even on beat anyway, Rea, Cani or Cassidy are all off beat as hell. You gonna have to learn the sync your vocals and don;t just throw shit on top of a beat. By all means keep working at it though, homie. Thats how you get better...... |
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12-14-03, 11:04 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 3ADC 323F
^ feel you.... the cannibus shit wasnt intended to be a release or nuttin... just somethin to show that you could spit over it. as far as the beat well different strokes for different folks. i mean like 5 people told me they was feelin it and some dont.. yea its more on a slow emotional tip dog. i could see someone singing the hook.
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12-16-03, 06:21 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
its pretty good...its on some R&B...but on some spittin shit too...hook is aight...i hear more spitting on this than singing though...so, its a start...keep it up.
oh...i just peeped the instrumental and not the one with the vocals. conclusiOnE
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