![]() |
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
![]() IP: A1C0 0CC2
this is one of my first songs......its not too great....but decent considering it was only my 4th or 5th thing to write....its kind of a christian deal....please let me get some feedback
verse 1: Ayo im back like i left something/ here to kick knowledge that could affect someone/ bout one man who grew up alone and lacked love ones/ lived with one of his boys and they aint have nothin/ messed up his life.......had a kid in 11th grade/ had to raise his son....he knew it was heavens fate/ he couldnt let himself down he had to levitate/ wouldnt allow this kid to grow up like he did he's gonna set him straight/ but the money was running low, his kid couldnt eat/ filled out applications but the phone just wouldnt ring/ he had corrupted visions of doin these crooked things/ but some of the things that this man just couldnt see/ is that HOOK: everything is gonna be ok the future only holds a brighter day everything is gonna be all good if you get right with god like you should everything is gonna be alright if you look to the lord to be your guide everything is gonna be just fine if the devil packs up and leaves your life Verse 2: so he'd pursue his thought stealing/ all the murders and drug dealing/ one of the boys up the block was rich so he was gon' kill him/ seen him rollin by in his new black cadillac/ so he gathered his glock, ski mask, and black bag/ proceeded through the night, there was no turnin back/ got to his house, broke through the window in the back/ alarm went off, was gonna run, but stopped after 2 steps/ saw him turnin the corner, put the glock to the dudes neck/ said i dont wanna do this but i gotta feed my lil man/ forgive my sin but my fate you see's in the devils hands/ said ok, lifted his chin, as if he accepted death/ closed his eyes, said i have eternal life in heaven left/ this was not in the plans, this act of bravery/ dropped the gun and said you were sent from heaven to save me/ i need jesus, im sorry, its been hard lately/ i avoided my signs im blind and i cant see/ that HOOK Verse 3: So he got cleaned up and turned to christianity/ got rid of the drugs, guns, all the insanity/ started attending a church full of people wantin to help/ gods love was the first of any love he had felt/ started followin christ, started doin good for himself/ got a job offer from church thatd have him cruisin to wealth/ the stuggle was over, his kid could finally eat/ got outta the hood, safe was somethin he could finally be/ bad boy turned good,(recorded this was before mase came back, no biting) proud of the change in his life/ fortunate for what had happened on that strange summer night/ from 1 life, 1 hood, 1 kid, from no job/ to one man with one jesture, one calling from god/ and now he knows HOOK please hit me with feed |
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin for feedback
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Light Weight
|
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Wow yall need to give feed to this because its really good
I think you gave a clear picture of every thing you were saying Making this a nice piece an since you wrote some thing that represent truth Im giving this a 10-10 because teaching the the truth is the most powerful message you can give any one,,,,we all have had thoughts of doing things until God takes over an shows us a better way,,,,great work,,,you keep doing what you doing an you will always get feed from me,,, God bless all
__________________
My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none ![]() |
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
thanks......it makes me happy to hear that....i didnt know if it was good or not....didnt know how people would take it.....thanks for the feed........uppin for more
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||
|
IP: AE92 E46C
I got a friend named Ike...I told him about this site one day, he garbage. . .
Is that you Zebra?
__________________
Pop Lotty, NiggaGet SoulClapped....E-Style!!! A |
|||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
nah im not your friend......leave some feedback if your gonna post please
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin for feedback
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin....feedback and i will return favor on any open mics
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin....someone please give some feed on this
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Light Weight
|
IP: 3240 794D
Dont worry i go throught the same thing homme
Daum yall give some feed back i been on here an he has only got feed from one the other dont count being he didnt give feed,,but insulted him instead Dont worry hommie keep your head up an reply to your own flow an it will go back to the top until some one gives it a chance thats what i do Just keep going in an saying things like...hmmmmm? feed back wouldn't hurt you know God bless you all keep your heads up
__________________
My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none ![]() |
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
thanks.........uppin for feed man......somebody please give me some feedback
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
uppin for feedback
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
***cITYSLICka***
|
IP: C729 E597
that was a really good piece.about sumthin that means sumthin'.i have no complaints.
good work keep it up.
__________________
![]() ![]() I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
thanks for the feed man.....uppin for more
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
No Relation To Tina
|
IP: A1C0 0CC2
i hate not gettin feedback....someone please leave me some
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|