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09-04-04, 03:25 PM | #1 | |||||||
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i need to feel like this one was mine[at least tonight]
IP: 95EB 880F
i need to feel like this was mine i'll roll this one over tonight i'll give the chance, but give it up for rock and roll dreams if you let me go i'll come back and do my part lets goslow and steady i'll take your hand if your ready we can walk that mile right before the sun sets dont worry about tomorrow lets focus on now before the dawn we'll get a second chance but dont trust the morning because you could be alone and the questions all in a bundle of roses that i'll leave , so you can retrace your steps but i'll let you know i'll wait on your backstep in that yard, with the swing and the big maple tree its crazy to think how far we've come but pretty soon we'll move on your always on the run and i'm always ready to go well we'll get bored, and lose track of the nights but something about the start will always stay in my mind rock and roll tonight |
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09-04-04, 05:15 PM | #2 | ||||
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I was feelin dat.....nothing really wrong wit it exept there were very few rhymin words
but other than that it was some tight shit............PLEASE hook it up wit a reaction on dis shit....http://community.rapverse.com/showt...233.........P.S. i would like to collab. on some tight shit wit you cause im feelin ya style........PM me if you down..............Peayce |
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09-04-04, 10:50 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: A987 DCD9
nice one man........ keep doin yo thang...
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09-06-04, 06:09 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 95EB 880F
that was hot i am going to suggest you get poet of the month or what ever, you never fail in droppin tyte stuff
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09-06-04, 06:22 PM | #5 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
thanks still uppin
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09-08-04, 06:26 PM | #6 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: C1DA C961
i like this poem too man, you keep spittin em out, you have a nack for this shit, nice work......1
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