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lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 02:40 PM.

WiNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 02:53 PM.

aight we doin this a little early ...tryin a new structure out...

I kicked you ass and took your name check out my sig...
"meet me on the southside" so I can put holes in yah "lid"...
(in the southside video the license plate reads lidz)

like "ashanti" you got "murder"ed by W"iNC" cuz i let it "rain on you"...(murder inc obvious)
got yah record tah 8-1 makin yah first loss tah me multiply into two...(i'm his only loss)

claimin you go "hard" when you touchin the gutz...
but "cum" "softer" then a back street boy bustin a "nut"...

you ain't a "heavy" wieght so i won't use all my might...
just "BEAT" you ovah the head with a "MIC"elobe "light"...

I'm "rippin'" you like "rednecks" do to they "jeans"...
"cutoff" and tourn at the half from seem tah seem...

spittin' flames at yah "structured frame" have it left for dead...(his verse)
got you more on "lock" then the "dreds" on marleys head...

beat you with a brick to the face...
and have you more uncordinated then a video with mase...

take this into account for your sudden barievement...
you've been boastin too long about meaningless achievement...(8-1)

your name discredits you cause all you "lyrics" lack "flowz"...
and half the wins in yah record are prolly no shows...

you wacker then a "broke" pimp you even key with a "limp"...(broke Dick)
if your style was like "nuttin" then you'd "cum" in a "splint"...

clean drop mane even got this done a little early...

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

Voted For: WiNC

winc gets this with better punches n good wordplay pretty consistent flow n ok structure..nice verse..lyrical you had stretch lines n pretty ugly flow your punches were ok but not good enough ta get this,should've tried some personals on him...
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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

votes plz votes
VOTE get to the polls

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

Voted For: WiNC

Not breaking lines down...felt this was one sided

WiNC- I like your new style..a good opener..some stretched out lines...ok flow...good punches...ok wordplay....nice closer...overall decent drop

LyricalFlowz23-You said twice he couldnt rip you...you dont have to repeat what you said....weak punches...structure started off nice, then started stretchin after the first 6 lines...flow wasnt all that great...no good personals.....no good wordplay...you need to elevate man

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damn lets get this voted on ...

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

I don't know, but do ya'll know what i mean when I say that it seems like lyrical just said more? even though his verse wasn't longer, it's like he got his point across better.. Winc was doing good in my eyes until he got on that gay shit, talking about "you Cum soft", that is gay.. points off for that.. plus lyricalflow had better punches to me. winc tried to come with some personals, but they weren't that significant to me.. lyricalflow's stucture was off, but he had better wordplay too.. there were internal rhymes in his bars that also made his flow shine through too.. All in All, lyricalflow i think tried harder and ended up winning to me.. he had better lines, and better rhymes, which is the root of it, so he gets my vote..

^ I guess the others felt differently

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

imma start off wit wINC first...his all around flow was coo, his structure was alrite, and his rhymin was aight...but to be honest, NOBODY UNDERSTANDS WUT DA FUCK U SAYING...i mean, i give it up to u for tryna be creative and all, but that was too much, and i kno u had wut u were talkn bout in "()", but that didnt help, that was a waist, cause then niggaz would haf'to read that, and it fucks up yo whole fflow in our head..elevate,,,and sugestion, put that crap at the end, at least have niggaz thiink during the flow, it'lll up yo votes

lyrical: once again, u did yo thangg playa, im starting to like u...yo flow was on point, and yo rhymin was aight, and yo punches were coo...couldve came harder than that tho, some places yo flow was choppy, and that could hurt u if u had a better competitor...big ups for doing ya thang...elevate & keep practing

overall: ya'll had some good shit, but obviously, winc wasnt on lyrical's level in this one, i think winc should go practice on wording his shit, then he will be fierce...good shit

oh yea, and drop votes on the below battles...good lookn peoples

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

this was a good battle but im givin it too lyrical because his personals were on point and he had some tight personals in there too n his structure was good if not a lil long but it still worked cuz he used so many multies
WINC's flow was good he had some real hot punches in there but some of them werent hittin as hard sometimes but he was still on point too
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344

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