Battle Rules:

3-5 barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 08:55 PM

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UnKnoWn-KiLLa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 08:56 PM.

Man u wack like shit so dont even try//
Im too mother fuckin good for u to reply//
This noob thinks hes good,but he doesnt understand//
This is like an easy battle to mother fuckin plan//
Im like his master while hes my bitch//
But hes not good enough to be my bitch cuz he cant rap worth a shit//
I have no reason at all to fear this hoe//
Cuz every concept he used came out at least a year ago//
He dropped hastily, only thing I can say is maybe practice in a stall//
Quite a few heads been here 4ever, but ur the wackest of all//

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 09:46 PM.

Appreciation And My Dedication Got Me Obtainin Rings Like Da Lakers
Ill Unleash Ur Sole(Soul) And Put It Back Together Like Shoe Makers
My Reputation Is Wat Got Dis Battle Highly Anticipated And Will B Spectated
U Cold Like Racist Faces, The Thought Of U Beatin Me Is Crazy Like Gay People Matin
Deres No Recovery Drills, No Subscriptions Or Covinent Shit
My Punches Leave Ur Ego Bloody Like Wen Ya Momz Period Hit
U A Begginer, U Aint A Balla Wit Rhymes Dats Fire
I Hypnotize And Emphasize My Thoughts Like Highliters
I Shoulda Betted Like Pete Rose, On Ya Weak Flows, What A Pitty
Next Time Don Take The Punishment And Battle A Member From Wise Men Committee

Voted For: Notorious Verses

notorious took this easy..beter punches..few personals...flow and structure was choopppy but overall this was dope.....ur vocab was sick

unkown: too basic u need to up ur game..dont put/ after every line.....and up ur punches


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Man u wack like shit so dont even try//
Im too mother fuckin good for u to reply//
This noob thinks hes good,but he doesnt understand//
This is like an easy battle to mother fuckin plan//
Im like his master while hes my bitch//
But hes not good enough to be my bitch cuz he cant rap worth a shit//
I have no reason at all to fear this hoe//
Cuz every concept he used came out at least a year ago//
He dropped hastily, only thing I can say is maybe practice in a stall//
Quite a few heads been here 4ever, but ur the wackest of all//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE GOOD ISH NCIE VERSE GOOD "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOING


Appreciation And My Dedication Got Me Obtainin Rings Like Da Lakers
Ill Unleash Ur Sole(Soul) And Put It Back Together Like Shoe Makers
My Reputation Is Wat Got Dis Battle Highly Anticipated And Will B Spectated
U Cold Like Racist Faces, The Thought Of U Beatin Me Is Crazy Like Gay People Matin
Deres No Recovery Drills, No Subscriptions Or Covinent Shit
My Punches Leave Ur Ego Bloody Like Wen Ya Momz Period Hit
U A Begginer, U Aint A Balla Wit Rhymes Dats Fire
I Hypnotize And Emphasize My Thoughts Like Highliters
I Shoulda Betted Like Pete Rose, On Ya Weak Flows, What A Pitty
Next Time Don Take The Punishment And Battle A Member From Wise Men Committee
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ YOU FROM DA WISE MY B HOMIE I CANT VOTE BUT U HAD NICE FLOW'Z GOOD ASS PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

NOTORIOUS CAME ALOT HARDER IN DIS BATTLE JUST KILL THA UNKNOWN-KILLA

UNKNOWN-KILLA

GOOD "Ok" WERENT DAT GOOD ENOUGH NOR IT DIDNT STAND OUT GOOD FLOW GOING BUT DA PUNCHES WERE LACKIN AND USE PERSONALS "OK" MAKE YA VERSE A LIL INTERESTIN

ANYWAY NOR-VERSES CAME ALOT HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES

NOR-VERSES SHOULD WIN DIS BATTLE E-Z

FROM YO FRIENDLY MEMBA

BKBRAWLA

WISE MEN COMMITEE DONT FUCK WIT US~!

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uppin on dis shit come on people start votin some more, dons leep on it ^^^^^

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Yall Nihgaz Can Fuck Wit Da Wisemen Tell Em' Brawla

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yo come on on uppin on dis shit, come on niggaz start votin

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

he was wack the other guy

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

verses got this
much more complex verse on the whole
pretty decent mix of personals n punches, nice complex flow n okay wordplay...

killa, ya shit was too predictable, it wasnt the most creative peice i ever saw, thats why i vote against you
no hate, just tellin it howi see it
return the fave in my sig
thanx

peace

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

Notorious took this easily, Unknown you had self-glorification in your opener - not a good start. Your punches were weak, and your wording was just too simple. But I can understand you're new here so just practice and you'll get better. Notorious, you had some ok punches in your verse, nothing too special though. You had a good opener, but it was dragged down by the length of your lines. That's really the biggest piece of advice I can give you - shorten your lines down. If they're stretched it throws your whole verse off, and even though you had some good wordplay at times, gotta fix your structure. No hate, keep doin' y'all thing...
V//Notorious Verses

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yo uppin on dis shitty battle, come on people vote on dis

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