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Old 06-13-04, 09:04 PM   #1
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harold the great vs. dfrost

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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
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no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
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Old 06-15-04, 11:54 AM   #2
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Check
 
Old 06-16-04, 06:14 PM   #3
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Woah didnt realise I was in this week.

Good Luck Frost.
 
Old 06-17-04, 07:37 AM   #4
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Dfrozt is gonna struggle, when trying to survive my text,
When his lines are known to suck, like gay chat cyber sex.
Harold is known to reck while D aint in my class,
Coz his skills reached their peak, and they’re looking at my ass.
Leave this kid blowin gas thinking with girls hes da shit,
But fact is only in the netball team…has he ever scored with chicks.
Your net reputation is wack, don’t deny or be resistant,
And ur crew matches ur sex life,the way its non-existent.
eye for an eye tooth for tooth, if only u believed that was true.
That wud mean all I need is a picture of turd……………………………
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦so my post could match you.


Just match me
 
Old 06-17-04, 10:49 PM   #5
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Whose Harold the great, what, there’s was another Russian Czar?
Fuck hurtin your pride, my shit will leave you with a scar

yous a stem below the bud, ya ain't built ta be dope
leave you like cud after one shotty off my lyrical smoke

kid is European, drives in the wrong lane and has special ‘plugs’
check the subtitle, brits got it backwards again, they known for producing homo thugs

damn, checked your battles, never seen so many newb’s and no shows
built his record off DQ’s, wouldn’t have won shit if it was left to the queer’s flows


to match ya ‘8’’s enough, but I’m goin the extra ‘mile’
leave ya shit in the trailer park while I move on in style
 
Old 06-18-04, 12:12 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by The Great Harold
Dfrozt is gonna struggle, when trying to survive my text,
When his lines are known to suck, like gay chat cyber sex.
That was just weak, played concept and self-glorifying!!
Harold is known to reck while D aint in my class,
Coz his skills reached their peak, and they’re looking at my ass.
Wack...more self-glorifying!!
Leave this kid blowin gas thinking with girls hes da shit,
But fact is only in the netball team…has he ever scored with chicks.
First line was weak, second line was aight....gud meta!!
Your net reputation is wack, don’t deny or be resistant,
And ur crew matches ur sex life,the way its non-existent.
Better line, aight wordplay!!
eye for an eye tooth for tooth, if only u believed that was true.
That wud mean all I need is a picture of turd……………………………
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦so my post could match you.
Nah!! Don't like it, and the ............ is just filler!!

Overall Harold you came real weak, you had a few playerd concepts and it was all pretty basic...nothing too special. Also you were self-glorifying in a couple of lines which I don't like and you used the ........... as filler which is really wack!!




Quote:
Originally Posted by DFrost
Whose Harold the great, what, there’s was another Russian Czar?
Fuck hurtin your pride, my shit will leave you with a scar
Weak...too basic!!
yous a stem below the bud, ya ain't built ta be dope
leave you like cud after one shotty off my lyrical smoke
Weak again, you need to use more complex wordplay!!
kid is European, drives in the wrong lane and has special ‘plugs’
check the subtitle, brits got it backwards again, they known for producing homo thugs
The gay shit is played, don't like this line cuz I'm a Brit head to!!
damn, checked your battles, never seen so many newb’s and no shows
built his record off DQ’s, wouldn’t have won shit if it was left to the queer’s flows
You went to the gay shit again, but it was funny...nice line!!
to match ya ‘8’’s enough, but I’m goin the extra ‘mile’
leave ya shit in the trailer park while I move on in style
Nice closer, using 8 Mile in there...clever!!

Ok DFrost you came weak in this battle to. I think you had a better flow than Harold and you didn't use any ..... for filler. Both y'all had some really weak punches and I think both of you had say two alright ones. I liked DFrost's better so he gets my vote!!



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Old 06-18-04, 01:01 PM   #7
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^haha

Quote:
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damn, checked your battles, never seen so many newb’s and no shows
built his record off DQ’s, wouldn’t have won shit if it was left to the queer’s flows


erm.....fake personal
 
Old 06-19-04, 09:24 PM   #8
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harold takes this with better punches and personals.......not really enthing esle to say cause most of dfrosts shit was fake and that is fucking wack if you need to do that

v/harold
























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Old 06-20-04, 02:24 PM   #9
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yo, I had a few bars that i was gonna get at him with but i left the shit to the last minute so when i checked the battle stats i saw mad names i didn't recognize and mad 0-0, 0-3 and other shit closed battles, didn't really have time to check em all so i don't know if its false or not but its a fuckin bar, don't decide votes on one bar

Quote:
Originally Posted by InFiniTe-LyriCs
yous a stem below the bud, ya ain't built ta be dope
leave you like cud after one shotty off my lyrical smoke
Weak again, you need to use more complex wordplay!!


alright, i think that was my best damn bar in the whole shit how ya gonna say theres no wordplay in that, his name used to be stem, cud is chewed up and spit out grass and plants and shit that a deer or cow or somethin ate, it might not have been a killer punch but it had mad wordplay
 
Old 06-20-04, 02:42 PM   #10
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kid is European, drives in the wrong lane and has special ‘plugs’
check the subtitle, brits got it backwards again, they known for producing homo thugs
~~~d'z best punch, gay punches are wack but this one is true

eye for an eye tooth for tooth, if only u believed that was true.
That wud mean all I need is a picture of turd……………………………
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦so my post could match you.
~~~~harolds best line, good idea but the first line is a filler and u said the word turd whish jus aint cool no matter what u say about it. but its kinda a good punch.

both u guys had too many gay punches and not havin a gettin girl things, need to get more creative, and on this battle alone i think dfrost came more creative, he only had 2 gay lines and one was true and tried some wordplay in there which shows talent so
~~~~~vote/ dfrost

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Old 06-20-04, 08:32 PM   #11
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dfrost wins
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