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Old 10-04-06, 02:37 AM   #1
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Old 10-04-06, 02:52 AM   #2
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ight leaving feed...

beat is ight...kinda ehhhh maybe a lil plain
but it still ight nuthin special

the hook is not bad at all
kinda catchy...still just ight

kk troublesome ur verse:
ur verse was ok not bad
flow is on point...delivery is pretty good
lyrics could be upped but they ight

zach's verse: just bout the same....delivery is decent
lyrics could be upped a lil more
flow is on point and it just ok
feelin ur emotion a bit more
over all it was decent

overall this was i'd say just an ight track
nuthin i'd probably really bump for a 2nd time
but it wasnt wack niether...it just seemed a lil ehhhh
but overall not bad but ya'll could do better

keep at it ya'll id give this a 6.5-7/10

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Old 10-04-06, 03:48 AM   #3
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intro is cool.

beat is kinda annoying though

hook comes in first. i like the lyrics on this one. emotion is cool.


verse 1 - feelin this right here. flow is cool. you stay on the beat. lyrically nothing spectacular but it fits well enough. i like that last line though. true stuff right here

hook again..is cool.

verse 2 - voice is kinda strange for this track. it doesnt fit as much as the first voice. lyrics are better in this one. quality isnt too good. turn down the dubs maybe.



overall this was a cool track. maybe just up your quality and it would sound a lot better..oh dang the outro..i dont really like the voice cause it throws the track off. but the words are cool.
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Old 10-04-06, 02:11 PM   #4
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aiite da beat's tyte.....

hook sets what u bout to say nice.......
1st MC - Ya quality could be upped, cuz ya vocals sounded muffled....you sounded like u were on flow........
2nd MC - ya flow's nice, a lil fuzzy but quality is okay......delivery is nice.....not bad man feelin ya story man...

Overall - pretty nice track, nice concept.....keep droppen...
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Old 10-04-06, 02:33 PM   #5
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yo toublesome, i removed the song til i re-record it. my quality is back to what it use to be = ), so im gonna re-do it so it wont be fuzzy.
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Old 10-04-06, 07:59 PM   #6
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Old 10-04-06, 11:56 PM   #7
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monotone... same shit all the way through to me.. nothing extreme that standed out.. like tight hooks.. catchy lyrics... def not something that could be played in the club... dont get me wrong... lyrics was on point.. .lyricism.. vocab.. multi.. some wordplay good though put into this piece ... daps for that.. just nothing i could dance to... decent track for rollin a j on a bad day after work.
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Old 10-05-06, 12:49 AM   #8
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werd preciate tha feed and thats wut i was aimin for....................
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Old 10-05-06, 01:38 AM   #9
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i like the intro.....hook was ight sum reflectin shit i like how u mixed it word verse one its cool delivery is cool but kinda sound monotone....hook is on again this is sum feel gud shit yo i like this hook....this dude sounds really underground word delivery same as trouble a lil monotone....hook again outro is aight overALL gud shit RTF
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Old 10-05-06, 02:41 AM   #10
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I love the delivery, like always. You got one of the sickest deliveries and I love that aspect. The chorus could be a little better, but sense I'm writing to this beat i know how it's kind of hard to line it up with that break in the beat. So it's pretty good. Verses were nice content, the first one lost a little of that presence you had but you brought it up. Hook is good, im feeling it a little more now. Second like Ecko said sounds really underground, but boring sometimes.

Overall really good presense, like always. Lol. Damn people using the beats I want to use.Intro was good.

Keep it up man. Good shit.
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Old 10-06-06, 03:28 PM   #11
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ur vocals r pretty clear verse,delivery is cool,ur flow was steady and yeah i like ur voice there something inspireing about it,u had the right presence,its just ok for the track,i'm feeling ur lyrics too..hooks is a lil repeatitive to me but meh its iight...ah yeah the beat is cool...


dude on verse two had a cool steady verse...i was feeling his lyrics too!...great emotion on this

outro...yup nice idea..i like the way it ended...i wud listen to this again if only it was downloadable....decent job!

gd luck on ur mixtape project!
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Old 10-06-06, 03:57 PM   #12
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