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09-26-06, 10:31 PM | #1 | ||||
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Look At Me Now
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"Look At Me Now"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4485971 chorus: Zach Warden verse1: Troublesome Verse2: Zach Warden Conspiracy Theories' up in this bitch!!! .................................................. ........................... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3084450 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3084449 .................................................. ...........................
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09-26-06, 11:05 PM | #2 | |||||
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I've heard this beat before, pretty ill actually. Troublesome, your flows on lock with the beat. Your lyrics are yet hot again. One thing I'm gettin sick of is your same old delivery. I'd like to see you switch ya style a bit more man. Get into a different flow or somin, twist it around a bit like I did on our collabo with PJ or somin. It's a deadly verse though regardless. it's just I been listen to you a lot.
Zach word, I like your hoook man, it's catchy as fuck. I like what you were sayin with it as well. Your flow is pretty good man, def on lock with it. Your lyrics are pretty good too man, I enjoyed how you gave this gangsta beat a twist words. Overall dope track! Zach can ya rtf on my track "Bridge City", thanks man dope track! 1
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09-27-06, 01:26 AM | #3 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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you better be good since u got my name and all
ight let me start out talkin on the beat its ight nuthin that stands out and gets repetitive but other than that it aint nuthin unstandable ight 1st verse troublesome: ur shit was dope...lyrics spoke truth which is #1 must have in rap feelin ur vioce always u got a good vioce ta deliver wit flow is completely on point..dont go off even wit one line lyrics are ight aint bad could be upped but everything can be upped there's no stopping...but the vocab aint nowhere near basic good verse hook: its ight nuthin real catchy but i like it..better than i can do i cant do hooks for jack shit but it was just ight zach's verse: u got more emotion than other people i heard but u can still up that shit cuz its not at the top the flow is on point and damn i love how u start it its so dope when the snare stops for that long it makes people reconize ur flow soo much easier lyrics were ight..bout same level as troublesome other than that keep doin it kid..first i heard of ya there i pretty much covered all the pro's & cons of ur shit one more con that stood out tho is how it ended sounds like ya'll didnt care and just faded it out too quick u should let that shit SLOWLY fade then let it end its less noticable that ya'll just wanted it ta end it and zach...props for not makin my name a disgrace keep droppin ya'll lookin good..i'd give this a 7/10..keep droppin
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09-27-06, 01:33 PM | #4 | |||||
scotia's finest
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upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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09-27-06, 05:56 PM | #5 | |||||
scotia's finest
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bumped..................
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09-27-06, 06:42 PM | #6 | |||||
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Beat is nice, Aint my kinda shit but its cool, suits at the topic.
1st emcee...Nice flow..Swagga is cocky n gully nice...Emotion is straight..Delivery is cool, lyrics are soundin nice man, couple nice quotables onnit.. Hook- Is cool, But simple 2nd emcee...Flow is nice, Emotion cud be touched up a lil, Delivery is cool, Swagga is pritty Cocky man nice feelin that..Lyrics are soundin nice This was a Straight Track..Keep up the work -1- |
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09-27-06, 09:24 PM | #7 | |||||
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respect ill return tha favour....................................to tha top
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09-29-06, 12:33 AM | #8 | |||||
scotia's finest
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bumpedddddddddddddddddddd
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10-03-06, 02:26 PM | #9 | |||||
scotia's finest
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to tha top..........................
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10-03-06, 03:14 PM | #10 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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listening
i am liking the opener...verse 1 wow...how true...nice concept on this mayne u got a tight flow and presence on this...aint nothing bad about ur verse...ur highs were a lil too high but it aint hilarious...delivery and quality..i LIKE ur verse...gd job zach...wow u good!...ur flow was steady mayne,lyrics are cool too...u had some catchy lines...pretty decent job from u too! hooks...well,there aint nothing special about it...its just iight...flows pretty well with the track... can i download this?
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10-03-06, 04:07 PM | #11 | |||||
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yeah on zachs page his myspace i believe
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