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05-30-05, 10:10 PM | #1 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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Musical Emotion (Valor ft. Fluidmoon)
IP: 2029 97B3
First verse = valor
second verse = fluidmoon Musical Emotion
Vivid Thoughts, right next to self expressions music brings creativity, and many life lessons for most its a blessing, made for the soul music brings emotion, warm and cold happy thoughts, along with sad feelings lyrics you can relate to, some so chilling to your inner parts, music is a gift all kinds of personalities, its hard to resist when it enters your heart, its like your lover always there for you, when there is no other music is like God, it relates to all colors It is the rhythm of your heartbeat, the essence of your soul, you can feel it all around you, the sounds soothe from head to toe, within the depths of being, can't live without it, for its a way of life, reminds us of good times and bad,morning to night, the more you listen,the stronger you grow, intellectual words so powerful to the ear, striving to change the world, through music you truly hear.. of struggles that have surpassed through the years, the experience in itself is worth living for, to speak your mind through music, is what the strength provided in the words is for, and as long as we keep living it, this feeling won't stop, for we are all the essentials of hip hop.
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06-02-05, 02:26 AM | #2 | |||||
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upping this dope collab'o
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06-05-05, 01:37 AM | #3 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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yup, leave links!!!
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06-08-05, 11:06 PM | #4 | |||||
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hello , FEEDBACK PEOPLE
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06-09-05, 01:39 AM | #5 | |||
God is a Fable.
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uppin this for my boy valor and girl fluid... will edit with feedback later but peep the collab wit me and valor fluid
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06-10-05, 06:22 AM | #6 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
when it enters your heart, its like your lover
always there for you, when there is no other music is like God, it relates to all colors ^my favo lines of Valor's verse to speak your mind through music, is what the strength provided in the words is for, and as long as we keep living it, this feeling won't stop, for we are all the essentials of hip hop. ^my favo lines of Fluid's verse I feel this is a piece the majority of people on this site can relate to, concept may have been done before but it's still all truth. Emotion was good, how you both portrayed the bond between person and music. It's more of an insightful piece than an imagery piece. You worded different aspect of the possible relationship between a person and music (hip hop), gave enough details and sound expression of entire piece was good. Keep it up!
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06-26-05, 04:54 AM | #7 | |||||
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thanks Dq
upping
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06-27-05, 01:33 AM | #8 | |||||
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upping for more input and feedback
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07-02-05, 04:14 AM | #9 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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when it enters your heart, its like your lover always there for you, when there is no other music is like God, it relates to all colors ^^WOW i felt the emotions on this nice u kinda used methaphors to describe feelings i think this wus well said seriously. Music doesnt have color nor race. F- of struggles that have surpassed through the years, the experience in itself is worth living for, to speak your mind through music, is what the strength provided in the words is for, ^^dammit when i though this poem couldnt get betta it did, ya'll really vibin of eachother and it focuses more on the topic, is true that Music is acknowledge as figure of speech. People express their issues and stuggles tru music. Like slavery days when they sang. This was wonderfull collab between 2 excelent poets. The dephtness of this poem really caught my attention well done by both this is a legendary piece.
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