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-The Shogun of the Dark-
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Rest In Peace [ballad to my dead soldiers]
IP: D190 7D63
niggaz are dying younger, no game just pure hunger
makes me wonder. how hots this summer is hell tryna pull me under? why'd benji have to die? just 9 or 10 with blood in my eye mum sez its ok to cry, but i can't and don't know why friends are fading fast, grown men and boys dodge random blasts niggaz shoot at large groups and ricochets leave legs in casts cookie got took, high speed pursuit, had loot stashed in the boot ran him down then gun him down, hard worked didn't taste the fruit my boy fuz got shot, drive by in moss side, where the G'z ride they fixed him up, then sent him pen, but he's back where we re-side hulme streets, act like they eat meat and drink red blood every corners tryna warn ya, tombs of more dead thugs this is my aria of sorrow, to those not seeing tomorrrow remember time in this lifes borrowed, and deaths a path we have to follow bury me blazing with a zoot and a flask of JD and let it read on my tomb R-I-P A-R-C
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dope
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I like this peice 9/10
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...inspires fear.
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This was mediocre, all your lines were uneven. So the flow was off. But this was decent.
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IP: D190 7D63
all feedback appreciated,thanks for the critique, omnivision, dont worry about how it looks it spitz well, trust me on that 1
if anyone wants 2 vote on a battle end me VS OG its been going forever now ![]() arch out
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tht shiit is hot be good work on tht daps
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-The Shogun of the Dark-
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IP: D190 7D63
thanks blood, appreciate the feed
uppiiimnnnnnn.....
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Closed no link pm me a link if you wish to have this re-opened
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