There's this kid who wakes up everyday who's got a ton of potential,
yet he's poor, doesn't know his birth-parents, and his grades ruin his credentials,
but this kid is persistent he helps out others and is always willin to work,
yet he's sickly, addicted to marijuana, and his clothes smell like bare earth,
but this kid's got a heart of gold and he enjoys makin others smile,
yet he has a short temper, and he's always bitter cuz he hasn't seen his parents in a while,
but this kid's coulda been somethin oneday, I could picture it when I watched him,
yet this kid was died the other day because all of his faults came back to haunt him/

Nice writing... it was short an to the point. I liked it. The content was really good. I feel somewhat like that kid you wrote about.


"There's this kid who wakes up everyday who's got a ton of potential,
yet he's poor, doesn't know his birth-parents, and his grades ruin his credentials,
but this kid is persistent he helps out others and is always willin to work,"

Besides the not knowing his birth parents line, that could have been wrote about me. So I liked those lines cause of it. I try to help out others to but that stuff backfires too much. I help them and end up worse off than when I started. I'm having a bad day so this response is gonna be stupid.

The whole thing was good. Not quite as good as the cop car one though hehe, jk. I like reading your posts. Nice job with this one.