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shadow 2 28.57%
Daz 5 71.43%
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Old 10-06-04, 08:16 PM   #1
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Daz vs shadow

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10 lines. Now more or less.
lets make this shit quick.
No biting recycling.
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Old 10-06-04, 08:17 PM   #2
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Daz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 08:17 PM.
 
Old 10-06-04, 08:31 PM   #3
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I dont have time for this.
Heres my ten Key'd

Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder..
chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over..
no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown..
and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown..
Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put..
lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot..
everyone knows that im better sir..
and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were..
Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter..
I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members..

Key'd
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Old 10-06-04, 08:54 PM   #4
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shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 08:54 PM.
 
Old 10-09-04, 11:54 AM   #5
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admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster??
becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster..
been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son...
cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson...
that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated..
strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted...
im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty..
cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty...
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Old 10-09-04, 12:14 PM   #6
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Voted For: shadow

shadow got this....
better punches, an mad flow to the brain cells, pretty decent drop...
ya may have lacked a lil creativty in the opener, but that was ya only flaw...

daz, ya verse was aight, punches never really connected an ya finisher was kinda weak....

on the whole the battle was pretty close, if it wasnt for dazs poor finisher, he may have had this battle...
but on punches an flow shadow got this...

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Old 10-09-04, 03:38 PM   #7
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Voted For: Daz

wow...can you say one sided?
daz completly merked shadow.

Daz...

Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder..
chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over..
ha! not hard hitting though
no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown..
and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown..
ok...could of had better wording.
Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put..
lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot..
heh...not feelin it much..i get it though
everyone knows that im better sir..
and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were..
funny...ok i guess
Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter..
I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members.
decent close

Shadow...

admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster??
becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster..
played opener...blah
been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son...
cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson...
wack!
that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated..
strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted...
you use wack to much...this line sucked too
im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty..
cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty...
the fuck? nope.

umm shadow came horrible and speakin of wack you used it
to many times in your verse which made me lose interest
in readin it. You had no good lines just a bunch of filler or
weak/played lines. Daz won with a better overall verse
less played lines and harder hitting punches.

V/ Daz
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Old 10-10-04, 10:35 AM   #8
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hahahaha yea ^^ madd dickriding uppin
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Old 10-12-04, 10:28 PM   #9
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Breakdown

Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder..
chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over..

what?....weak opener

no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown..
and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown..

good meta but...but no punch

Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put..
lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot..

Seriously stretched...no punch

everyone knows that im better sir..
and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were..

wow u don't get worse than that

Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter..
I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members..

Opener was nice...2nd line killed it...weak personal


Breakdown:

admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster??
becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster..

lol...nice play off his name..first decent line I seen

been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son...
cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson...

NO!!!!jackson lines seriously played

that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated..
strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted...

NO!!!!!again...where's punch?

im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty..
cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty...

weak...an rhyming witty & titty?.....blah

Flow: Shadow
Structure: Shadow
Punches: shadow
Personal: Shadow(only decent line in battle)
Metas: Daz(oxy moron..nice)

Vote: Shadow
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Old 10-13-04, 10:45 PM   #10
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U sway. And all of ur votes are D/R. Stop swaying and getting ur gay friends
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Old 10-13-04, 10:48 PM   #11
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lmao daz murdered here..

the closer finished him off.. then the opener was cool, and the land mines one..

daz got this..

some one poll my vote, this an alias cuz i aint have my other names no more, i have way then more posts to vote

umm.. all together around 3,000

so poll my vote..

Daz got this, more creative.. Shadow came blah, not enough for the win.
 
Old 10-13-04, 11:05 PM   #12
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Going for 20!!!






















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Old 10-13-04, 11:05 PM   #13
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9 more niggas.. reconize!!!!!!










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Old 10-17-04, 01:14 AM   #14
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Voted For: Daz

ok shadow good start then your punches slacked and really made your verse wack here structure and flow was good vocab decent a 4/10
daz good opener here good sundown personal lol at the ender haha that was fucking dope punches couldve been better but were good structure and flow off vocab good 6/10
basically i always say this punches and disses win battles and daz won in those therfore he gets my vote return honest votes
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Old 10-17-04, 01:20 AM   #15
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Voted For: Daz

shadow
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was played and/or wack.. none of ur punches connected.. that dazaster line is played, as is jackoson, as is mom jokes, and that one about deleting veres is just wack.. attempted personal, but came out wack and played..

Daz
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. ive seen some of the concepts before, but some were good.. most of ur punches connected.. the only one i didnt really like was the last one.. u attempted a personal in ur last bar, but i didnt like it that much..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both attempted one personal.. neither had multis.. Daz had better wordplay as well as more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Daz gets my vote..

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