Starting off as a youth realizin life is short, It is priveldge not a image of sorts, It's like my life was a chase and I was jus caught up in this life, the pain ,the knife, my future, my wife, my kids, the strife, the job that I lost, The lives I have cost, From successful ventures to hearin my boss, You'll never get anywhere in life Mack and thats a fact, Well with you here man I can surely belive that, Always somebody holdin me back, No true feelings all it was is an act, Matter fact I came from nothing to more, From iller to raw, from a nobody to makin jaws hit the floor, I been gone for awhile but Im still here wit ya, To share my rhymes and experiences in my life as a picture, Cause no matter what lines draw you in, You'll never understand my cries or my sins, My loss or my wins, Whether a new or a end will begin, Backward lyrics infused with my spirits maybe someday vocals grab ya headphones to hear it, Listen to my messages and reality, and tell me I am the man that I wanna be, So now I'm back in action in the rapbattles faction, Tryin to give you something different to quench ya satisfaction, A new fresh flow, with something added extra, So you and ya family can smile and sit next'a, The screen and read scene after scene cause my rhymes is art and without the mack the rapbattles would be empty and surely fall apart,
And now I'm back welcome me, Cause I'm stronger than ever the invinsible emcee.

What up peeps, I been off for awhile but I'm back Merry Christmas and Happy Hanukkah.

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quite enjoyed this....despite it being in paragraph.....its an easier read in bars..but....some nice emotion in this, thought it started off better than it finished....but the flow was there and the scheme was decent...good.......pZ

This was easy to read. It was kind of a new way of droppin it. It was good. Vocab could use a little work though. Title doesn't really go with it. Good drop.