10 lines is the minimum so 10- 16 lines deadline is tomorow midnight peace

aight aight


Yo you should add shit to yo name casue thats all you Droppin/
Im yo diol,you follow me so much I could charge you wit stalkin/
Im the best,no contest,You fuckin useless... like guns wit no trigga/
Switch on boxin and Tysons' like "PoiSon-PeN,damn thas a bad nigga"/
You can put the mic down right now,you cant flow or battle/
You couldnt get a decent piece off ass if u chased J-Lo wit a scalpel/
So screw u and the fool who told u to persue rap/
yo whole crews' whack,u dont belong in rap like fuckin Jews in Iraq/
Dont run yo mouth or I show u what hells about/
Got no chance cause my MC murda rate is greater then Biggies fat cell count/
So close yo mouth and get out,leave the game alone/
Lyricly u still shittin in diapers so come back and challenge me when u grown/

PoiSoN-PeN

Battling you is wasting my time, cos you just prooved you cant fucken rhyme/
You just wrote your death wish with your "poison" pen bitch/
For my first spit, im gonna put you in a fit like epileptic brain spasms/
My ryhmes hit harder than a nympho on viagra/
Just cos you'll be feelin' my uppercuts, you'll never be a cut above me/
Even your mama knows you would have looked better a stain on the sheets/
You and your faggot crew pack more shit than removalists/
After I finish this lyrical murder, i'm gonna tapp your girls ass like morse code/
Ill make your body dissapear like Copperfield/
better stick to battling the rest rest of your muppets you fucken puppet.

basically this was no contests, poison pen hit him up good.....

quote droppin:

Battling you is wasting my time, cos you just prooved you cant fucken rhyme/

ok now his next lines:

You just wrote your death wish with your "poison" pen bitch/
For my first spit, im gonna put you in a fit like epileptic brain spasms/
My ryhmes hit harder than a nympho on viagra/

says it all really......

uppin for votes vote vote plz if u want peeps to vote for yo shit u should vote for their shit cmon dont sleep on this...........................................pce

I give this to Poison Pen...but really i can't say by much you both dropped stretched lines.....try to work on structure and flow both of you....good metas i saw some stuff that i liked.... Your punches were just non existent.... Droppin and alot of your stuff didn't really rhyme you might wanna work on that..poison pen work on structure and come up with more creative personals.....that one was shit...vote poision pen..peace...no hate....one

that was a fuckin weak battle............yo poison urs sucked i expected u to get blown out......then i read droppins and i wanted to die lol.......droppin can u even make a rhyme?........ok poison u def got my vote but u need to elevate

u jus mad casue i dissed u lol.............but ok anyway O MASTER OF RAP BATTLES TELL ME WHAT I NEED TO DO SO ONE DAY I CAN BE AS COOL AS U LOL NO FOR REAL WHAT TELL ME

iight werk on ur srutcure n dont stretch ur lines........dont have played lines like ur closer was def pre written....jus elevate man expand ur game.........i aint hatin on u man im jus tryin to help u out

aight aight but uum no i didnt pre write the ending and u really cant judge how i shouldeve wrote it or not cause u dont know how i would eve deliverd it in real life all u can do i read the lyrics and humor and shit not how it sounds in yo head casue thas u i might have a completly diffrent way of spittin it