This is what i have been feelin for the last 5 months,i moved from where i lived all my life to where i am now,

tell me what u think.

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Shit!Im kinda down on my luck,right now im distressed,
pressed to the limits and stuck, i'm so fuckin depressed,
confess i repress my feelins,but its how i get threw my dealins,
late at night i start kneelin,tilt my head back and pray to the cielin,
I start reelin in,but i don't know whats real-in, my life,
was takin away,when will i start healin,miss thegirl i want 4 a wife
think about what could have been every night,
think bout what would have been if my wrongs were right,
maybe winnin would be my path but failures in my sight,
sinnin in a bath,my educational modavation is light,
i know where im headin,but i won't even put up a fight,
used to look forward to the weekends for years,
hang with my boys, drink our weekend pack of beers,
now i dont want the week to start, cuz when week-end comes,nothin but tears,(line was to long)
how am i supposed to cope with sharp pain of these fears,
they say home is where the heart is,well my heart ain't here,
Waterloo is where the whole part is,life just ain't fair.(fare)

UPPIN please give me some feedback on this.............................................. .................................................. ......

i like this one.. keep up the good work hommie dont give up, you got some skill there i c, nice peice overall

aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh, i keep forgetting to post the rating 7.5 out of 10

Good Luck!!

cool shit you speakin, i feel you in this one dog. Life is really not fair. i 'm in a situation were i'm locked inside my own mind and i'm just trying to clear problems that need to be resolved with the court. but that shit aint gonna put me down. you flow tight and deserve to be on top.

I see potential. It isn't to the point of perfect yet, but it was a good flow. I felt this. Telling stories is good.

thanks for the feedback.keep it comin............................................. .................................................. .......