I'm a g from the streets of the yo!!!
if you ever had a girl you know i fucked that hoe...
I got more beef than ya towns local deli
fuck wit me and i'll put a clip full of bullets in ya best friends belly

I hate these fucking people they don't do shit for me
all they do is sit around and watch tv
but i'm a dog so i watch my own damn back
i never slip i got grip but nigga don't you trip before you get ya wig split
I know I talk alot shit
but i got two 9's and three clips to protect my lips...

I got enough ice on my wrist to freeze you like sub-zero
look around dog hovaman is a hero ya'll cats is like my dad ya'll just some fuckin zeros!!!
as I look back at my life that shit was filled wit drama runnin round the hood dog I had five baby mamas.
now i sit back and relax and live life to it's fullest but dont get me wrong little homie i still got three clip's full of bullets!!

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This was ok...but you need to work on your structure, dont put it in paragraph form like that, put it line on top of line, cause some people findi it hard to read in paragraph form, and keep your lines around the same length.....but keep at it.

Decent....deli line really played, not much flow or multis
not a good topic to played
overall 6.5/10

u aint serious i know u aint serious this was your kid sister's freestyle she broke into yo shit and posted this, please tell me thats what happend

BISH! YOU AIN'T GOT SHIT ON ME!


PEANUT HEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!!!!!!!!!!!


Real g thuggin from the alaskan projects.

YOu been challenged, meet me in my thread: The Rapsss.

This piece was too kiddy, Shoot you in the belly??...nuff said....This was a bad attempt...if you are 12 then elevate if you are not...then you should really elevate..one

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YO All yall niggas talkin shit yall all puwankstas yo if yall want it holla at the other boy from the yo And Hovaman U no who this is keep spittin them nersery rhymes and let the bitches hate ....yp's.......................................... ............holla

like he said nursery rhymes. hey how will peanut head and hovaman battle when they share the same 13 brain cells?who will decide who gets 7 and who gets 6? And Phatboy, go shoot yourself in the foot or something, prove your mother wrong and do something right

yah agree with all the other people, structure, bad topic, who care if you have beef, anyway elevate

..Your A Disgrace To Netceein' & The Hiphop World In General.Please Retire Now

ok there wasn't ne good lines in this peice.....the flow was off ....no vocab at all ...just elementary shit......there was no structure in the whole thing ...no topic ...just words the rhymed

elevate^^^^

freakyjay says is there anybody worth fucking battling out there

ill battle any fagget out there