10 Lines - House rules - Due tonight.

Fuck this kid; dont attempt to win; cus you suck - dont live;
cause Ack' making crowds laugh harder then your name did!
Your trys are failed; have him more off track then trains derailed;
gaz' is sharp as a needle? well if so - ill drop his ass in hay bails!
And I laugh because I pitty your words; winning? your absurd,
you arent even holding up some action..like misplacing verbs!
Your nothing to deal with; getting delt with correctly royal;
and im sure to wrap your plans to win - like using fucking tin foil!
Losing your battle; that shouldnt be faught; got this kid caught;
so ill press lincolns face onto his forhead - to have a penny for thought!

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Your a Light Weight Pipe Dream camaflauged behind a white scheme/
Ackusation as hard as Ballerina durin a Choregraphed Fight Scene/
Far from a lyrical sensation never gonna be king of this rap nation/
Nothin worth battlin with.. your just a fuckin pussy...thats my acusation/
The thoughts of battlin me is absurd, the loss I wont be \takin/
You got me mistaken, ill strip and eat your lines like a side of bacon/
Call me a Mic Crook, cause I Steal It before you have a chance to rip It/
And Spit Shit From upside down scripts so you can't flip it/
Skip It, Don't Spit Kid, just button Your Lip And Zip It/
Nit Wit tried To kick it but slipped and looked like a dumb shit/
Grip slipped..got the mic stripped from his hand..its over,theres nothin more to deal with/

aight good luck

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good drop by both of u, but gazeebo's verse was better, ill break it down. The thing about Gazeebo's verse was that he had a much bigger vocabulary, and that really does help ur punches. Also, he had a lot of nice wordplay in the battle that also helped his punches. Ackusation, ur stuff is too simple an sum played out stuff (i.e ur finisher). Also, structure, id call that a tie, cant really judge one over the other. Ackusation, Ur verse wasnt bad but Gazeebo's was better. He wanted it more.

Vote- GaZeebo

Return the favour, both of you by hitting the battles up in my sig with honest votes plz. Thx.

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