i struck a deal with phoenixx..

da deal is dat if i beat u in a battle i get 2 join paragone........

so looks like u got a battle....

here da rulz

10-20 lines
no d/r
no crew votes
blind spit i wil spit first
verse due 20 mins afta check in

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oh yeah metres

check in so i no ur gonna show

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cum on dawg check yoself in................................................ .................................................. ........................

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yo yo man....meters i c uve gone offline....well its kinda l8 naaa so im a go get sum sleep and drop ma shit in da mornin afta c uve checked in.......

dont 4get blind spit

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YOURE FUCKED.

YOU ARE NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR PARAGONE.

BITCH.

CHECK IN TOMORROW.


IM TIRED RIGHT NOW. TOMORROW I WILL MURDER YOU, DONT WORRY, YOU WILL GET YOUR DEATH.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

ayo meters i c ur now online.........................cum check in......................i will start 2 key in ma shit now and rememba blind spit no feedin bitin etc...........................

holla

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This is my check in. I was in a bad mood yesterday, sorry dawg. I'll drop in about 20................................................ ...................
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

aight man just seen ya shit but heres ma verse

Im on a rampage and meters is in my way/
hes gonna get banged up just like Michael J(ackson)/

Im loaded wit lead, so i suggest you run home/
Cos i'll leave more holes in your head than a microphone/

Meters your styles wack,yo lyrics,they colder than a salami/
My flows drowning yo ass like a tsunami/

I smoke you like a crackpipe, but i wont get high/
Cos like your lyrics you weak shit the death injection i apply/

I discharge toxic blows like a prostetute/
Even if i was a million dollar child,I wouldnt of fostered 'YOU'/

My lines are sour like lemon and lime/
Your fuckin wack, but ur already in ur prime/

I Cum wit many styles, like a chocolate collaboration/
The only way your coming hard is through masturbation/

I beat you in this battle,im in, im no longer the imposter/
My styles hit you, you better add me to the paragone roster/

peace no lets c wot u got...................................

remember blind spit 20 mins

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cum on dawg i sed 20 mins where u at???????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????

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Sorry, friend stopped by in the middle of writing. I've never taken this long to post, sorry dawg.


Correct ya name to MC Haines 'cause ya *brief* punches never landed,
Wingpsan that of a limbless *boxer*, step up to me? ya can't even stand kid,

Slam this bitch until a clenched fist penetrates his ovarian cyst,
Chance of survival? unlikely as making the Paragone waiting list,

Sig reads 'Can't C Me', like i needed to know ya lack presence?,
Ya definitely 'ill', start ya own crew: disease infested peasants,

Dated attacks leave cats sedated and ya own ego deflated,
KO'd by UnderRated, now ya want ya carcass to be desecrated?,

Only time wannabe cleaned my clock involved polish and rags,
Instead of throwing punches, you throw in white surrender flags,

Ya at my submission, it only took 12 lines to end your bitchin',
I reject ya position, ate ya verse, I now have malnutrition

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Didnt even read the raps but im going 4 the other guy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MODS ARE WANKERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MCAINE IS A WANKER!!!!!!!!!!!

Breakdown---->
punches-meters
flow-errrm
structure-no
metas-meters
complexity-meters
sustainment-meters
enjoyment-meters
overall-meters

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99772

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

opener: meters
closer: tie
punches: meters
structue: tie
vocab: tie
wordplay: meters
overall: meters


cud both y'all plz hit this up with an honest vote right quick
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100819

punches- meters
flow= tie, more toward meters
structure= tie
wordplay= meters
vocab=tie, more toward mc aines
humor= meters
creatvitiy= meters
effort= mcaines lol

vote= meters

EVERYONE HIT THESE UP WIT HONEST VOTES PLEASE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=killer

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100076