10-20 lines
same rules
Drop your shit.

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iight here goes......

Yo check it yo

Bussin at ya like i spray guns juss like the guerilla warfare...Now you turn runnin like you forrest gump while im still gunnin wid bullets to spare//

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iight here goes......

Yo check it yo

Bussin at ya like i spray guns juss like the guerilla warfare...Now you turn runnin like you forrest gump while im still gunnin wid bullets to spare//

You juss wack...datz wat i hear from you after i gave you a head smack//
Got rhymes at attack...eatin you like the other emcees is juss a midnight snack//

Yea im black....and ill buck at cha like young buc wid his mack//
Knocked you off track....leavin dazed and confused like you been smokin crack//

You prolly need to go to the Wackeness emergency center....after i lay ya @ss down and leave you bleedin right after//

I hope you not juss another white cracker.....cuz imma punch you so hard at ya blatta that ya guts bust out and splatta//

Leavin you parapalegic after these punches land.....Ya rhymes end up bland ….cuz the only way you can get me is walkin wid ya hands//

FINISHIN OFF THIS BITCH
Eki is juss a wack name....you tryin to hard wid ya mind and fingers in strain...The disses and punchlines went ryt to ya brain...Rap lessons yo i think you gotta obtain...leave this bia laid face down cuz his gay dik rydin frens is the ones to blame//

eh yo EKi this juss a fun battle iight. no beef cuz i juss wanna get battlin again.Yo you in a crew??? cuz we could make a crew if you up to it but spit ya stuff thought. 1ONe1

Takes you 20 min to write one line?
Fuck , I don’t even have to diss, the battle is mine
There aint no gorilla warfare here, but being from Hawaii
Your mom must be one big hairy beast, like Gorillas in the Safari.
10 lines is a minimum, you wrote two, reached your maximum
Don’t get angry, huff and puff, why you getting the shits
You wanna, see the Major pain in me with one of his mental fits?
I don’t wanna hurt your pride, just help you out, your shit is wack
You drop wack lines, you can’t get respect
Come on yayo, stop playing, my rhymes are suffocating
One more thing before I go,
It takes more than a High school student to ruin my flow.

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good battle for both of ya......
but eki's shit was more personal so my vote goes to him
but some hot battle man.....
keep this shit up dawgss.....

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diss battle was alright nothin for me to go ohh or nothin

i shouldnt even vote but i know how yall feel because people on this site act like they can't vote

so this is how it is

opener:tie
flow:eki
wordplay:eki
punches:eki
closer:eki

overall:eki

peace out cuzzin an keep it real

I odnt understand if noone votes how you suppost to stick to that 2 battles maxium crap. Anyways...
thank for the vote.... Once i get my 100 posts ill make sure to return the favor! Peace out!

i thought this battle was elementary...

Yayo: your verse contains so much filter and majority of your verse is forced. your lines are stretched and your bars are uneven. you were redundant at times (check bar 4), you're punches weren't connecting and when they did, they were soft.
However, you have alot of potential for some decent punches when cut out some of the unnecessary shit.

Eki: Your flow is off, making it hard to get into your verse. your forcing rhymes as well. you did have a good opener, but it looks like you didn't want to go anywhere with it. you had few punches and they were weaks at best. all filler, you were just feeding and replying to his verse.

vote- yayo... for at least attacking his opponent

Good Job you two, work on you shit.

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