http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96407

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...387#post1011387

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...394#post1011394


from ghetto to ghetto, suburb to suburb/
johnny 6-feet uses his bars to club herbs/
and anyone who can't yet evolve into a vet/
fishermen geeks whole lives revolve around the net/
now suppose i used a tech-nique beyond wordplay/
to hurt any fucker's eardums in the worst-way/
if you prefer, hey, i can take it back to fistfights/
this might be the reason you stay awake and shit nights/
you can't spit right, you need to tighten your throat/
cut off the oxygen, your neck looks right in the rope/
i can read every mind like i'm in cerebro/ (x-men, dummy)
come up with mad science when submerged in weed smoke/
i get my third eye polished with a buffed up shine/
its roughly time and no-ones gonna fuck up mine/
i'm on a new age intellectual stand point now/
one who rages in spectacles and tears joints down/
i know i passed the info to whom it may concern/
too hot for them to hold so who are they to burn?/
on the night shift, talking with the man upstairs/
not God, the manager outside the night club "ware-/
house" trying to convince him to let me on stage/
so i can express publicly, my feelings beyond rage/
but until i step up, you know i wont be mindin'/
the bottom lining, is i'll keep on grindin'/

look for the audio...pzz.

nice piece, im guessin it was a keystyle,

pretty hot shit, i was goin to comment on ur structure.
but nah

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was good
might sound betta on audio

I felt this piece. For a key it was good.
Listening to the beat for grindin, flows with it nicely.

I think it would be safe to say this would be pretty good as a audio as well.

Keep dropping.