song we made about betta dayz on the horizon....nice song



1st verse Straie
2nd verse Y.T.
3rd verse D-verse
4th verse Straie
5th verse Y.T.
chourus Y.T.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/straiemusic.htm

iight...


the beat is hot.....ya sort of reminded me of bone thugz for a minute....but ya gotta pick up your voice and show more emotion...but sum people flow the way they feel and the way the melody is going, so i guess you was probably doing that...both ya did ya thing...wasn't really feelin the hook tho....."betta dayz" is just to common now, so it aint that original to me....

i give this a 6/10

but keep doin ya thing.....OnE





I'm Ghost...

thanx for the feedback.yeah on my part I try 2 match my flow to the tempo and meaning of the song..my boy did the chourus,lol, it grew on me.......much appreciated......will return the favor........stay up

up...up........and away

uppin

Dammit............uppppppppppp

*sighs* up