this was written by one of my good friends and i really wanted it to be shared and get some feedback its long but worth readin ..so give her sum advice this is the first time her shit has been shared..thanks...

do i love you or do i love the thought of you?
i know weve been friends for awhile and that i know you like no other
but are we ready to ruin that to be with each other?
i mean, should i throw away everything for something so unsure?
i really need you to help me see that you can give me so much more!
if i let myself i could be so in love with you
but when i start to let go, i think about the other boys and what they put me through
will you do that to me..will you leave me scared and bare?
i know that you told me you'd never, that youd always care
right now im so confused 'God please help me understand!'
im getting dizzy now and my feet aren't helping me stand
thinking to myself 'why does it all come down to me?'
so i feel myself slowly slipping into uncertainty
i cant think, i cant see, i cant breathe
i want to let go, to forget, to stop everything, oh please!
slipping into nothing i feel someone's touch
im afraid to look, afraid it might hurt too much
but then i open my eyes and its you i see
pulling me out of the darkness and setting me free
you kiss me and hold me tightly in your arms
i try to pull away, but whats the use. im already gone
gone head over heels in love with you
i love you more than ive ever loved anyone before
i cant believe i said that as i feel myself sinking to the floor
loves a crazy thing and im afraid to let go
afraid that you'll tear my heart and wear it for show
so ill crawl back into my ball and wait for the day
when youre not just a thought but my reality
-jharnelle randolf

DO NOT SLEEP!!! THIS IS A GOOD PIECE give her the attention she deserves


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99747

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99792

thanks...

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~