you no the rules

lets go

alright yo, i'm checkin in i'm fixin to post my verse now i guess...



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dats cool
just spit
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sry to free post but when r u (Icantlose) gonna post ur flow in our battle. Just reminding you in case you forgot


aight

1Love

i will merk, hate and lyrically rape dude/
make you look so ugly girls won't even date you/
strong-willed, hard faught.. yet totally forgotten/
this man has less teeth than osama bin laden/
he don struck a match, too bad.. you not gonna pass/
dis man is just gonna sit here and look at my ass/
so naieve this man here thinks he's a G/
watch your chimney, i might drop by for christmas Eve/
this mans hope of success are long gone/
he could pass off as the hunchback of notre dame

check me out

I'ma welcome you to your first biggest showing/
and show you're style's just a "flipped fit" like reversible clothing/

Next time I post you better get to runnin/
Cuz I’ll Put my dick in your eye, so you can see my cumin/

your rapping past your days.....collapsing and you'll fade/
this fag stays all hunched over like a dog crapping razor blades/

cuz real emcees like me hate faggots dat make bitch moves/
maybe if diss cat had a bitch his hand wouldnt leave ya dick bruised/

you need to realize you just another Wanna-B fake ass Rapper/
like two white kids tryin to act hard askin they friends who they think is Blacker/



now let the votes begin

look this is how i will brake this down
both of these cats had some nice flow but icu took this with a better flow. dat opener was hard as hell

"I'ma welcome you to your first biggest showing/
and show you're style's just a "flipped fit" like reversible clothing/"

opener:icu
flow:icu
punches:icu
wordplay:tie
closer:icu

latin knockout keep doin ya thang you spit some hot shit but i felt icu was better

i think i can't lose took this one......
just better rhymes and shit but good battle man
but i can't poll vote .... sorry


vote on my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100633

can yall people please vote we already got 35 views with only 1 vote

come on people lets get these vote crackin
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uppin 4 votes.....


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Open = Icu
Flow = Tie
Punches = Icu
Wordplay = Tie
Closer = Icu

Vote = Icu

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uppin
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stucture-tie
flow-icl
punches-icl
opener-icl
closer-icl


for the record ICL rap and clothes arn't black things...there universal,because a white kid wears rocawear and raps doesn't mean they want to be black.(still a good line.lol)

uppin for some votes

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