checkin' in....

10-12 lines, i'll spit first
all the usual rules...no d/r or crew votes...the whole nine...
good luck

checkin in here we go................................................ ...................................

back in the saddle, back rappin' the battles/
i'm crackin' some wack jack that's attracted to cattles/
i can't even read your name right (K-mist?), i guess i'm illiterate/
i'll just shut my eyes and spit at you, i guess this shit's hit or miss/
if it's a spit or a diss, i'm still rippin' your shit apart/
you're 5-and-0 now, pretty good - i guess it's a start/
but get used to losin' son, or go back to tippin cows/
or hit the store for more of that moonshine you're sippin' now/
i'm flippin' out at my fly wordplay - or is it my flow?/
i'll let tha voters decide if my comeback shit was dope.

wow..pretty light stuff, i'll admit....i was watching the MTV battle tonite and got reinspired. you're up...

Yo the only time this kid spits hot shit
Is after he done licked a fudge covered banana split
Hoodat's a hoodrat suckin on that sack for a stack
Couldn't give a rap attack so he sat there and wacked
This kid thinks he's dope but the only time he dope
Is when he put in my pipe and smoked
Blaze this kid up cuz my words so hot they scorch my tongue
He saw the Kemy$t comin, run hoodrat run
Its all in fun, this massacre is over in just one bar
But from where u "bit" so hard, there has to be a "scar"
Whatever im out, please spit something not seen before
Cuz if all u got is cornfields, a loss will be in store

nice drop lets get some votes on this bitch............................................. .....................

uppin..........................................
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yo somebody let me know how to check in so i can start spittin..i aint knew to the game juss to this website aight help a nigga out

lets get some votes............................................. .................................................. .....................

Kemyst:Verse wus good,punch's were nice,flow wus good but not totally on point!!......structure wasnt bad overall da verse wasbt bad shoulda came stronger!!...Nice try tho!!

Yo the only time this kid spits hot shit
Is after he done licked a fudge covered banana split
Hoodat's a hoodrat suckin on that sack for a stack
Couldn't give a rap attack so he sat there and wacked
This kid thinks he's dope but the only time he dope
Is when he put in my pipe and smoked
Blaze this kid up cuz my words so hot they scorch my tongue
He saw the Kemy$t comin, run hoodrat run
Its all in fun, this massacre is over in just one bar
But from where u "bit" so hard, there has to be a "scar"
Whatever im out, please spit something not seen before
Cuz if all u got is cornfields, a loss will be in store!!

^^ dat verse wasnt dat bad no 1 should hate but like we all could agree shoulda came better wit da punch's!!

Ok Now

Hood:Shyt wus hott!....i liked da flow on it,.wordplay wus hott keep dat on point!!.....punch's were nice coulda been stronger tho but still nice!!...Good job!!

back in the saddle, back rappin' the battles/
i'm crackin' some wack jack that's attracted to cattles/
i can't even read your name right (K-mist?), i guess i'm illiterate/
i'll just shut my eyes and spit at you, i guess this shit's hit or miss/
if it's a spit or a diss, i'm still rippin' your shit apart/
you're 5-and-0 now, pretty good - i guess it's a start/
but get used to losin' son, or go back to tippin cows/
or hit the store for more of that moonshine you're sippin' now/
i'm flippin' out at my fly wordplay - or is it my flow?/
i'll let tha voters decide if my comeback shit was dope.

^^ nice verse,but not ery punch wus da strong!!...but keep it up aiight kid!!

Vote:Hood

Reason:Overall his verse wus better!!...(i speak da truth)

ON3

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let's help each other out here, err'body. the only way this thing works is if cats vote a few when they're online. uppin..........

uppin for the third time....let's get this thing closed out..............
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Opener- Mi$t
Closer- Mi$t
Flow- HooD
Punches-Mi$t
Structure- HooD
Enjoyment- HooD
Personels- HooD
That was an ill battle---HARD TO JUDGE both had alot of nice shit.....
Vote- HooD
Mi$t if u had a couple personels in there u woulda got it! NICE BATTLE YO
return the favor wit honest votes
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