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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Chrit 5 100.00%
PaYce 0 0%
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Old 12-30-03, 01:58 AM   #1
PaYce
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PaYce vs. Chrit

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10-12 lines
no crew/hate/DR votes
ill drop soon
you drop in reasonable amount of time (like an hour or sumthin)

checkin in...................................
check in after your battle with Aragorn.
 
Old 12-30-03, 04:55 AM   #2
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alrite Chrit...when I see that you check in...i'll drop my verse. Wanna make sure that u check-in first and that u don't run away =) lol. Just playin.
 
Old 12-30-03, 09:49 AM   #3
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Old 12-30-03, 11:22 AM   #4
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What the hell does Chrit mean...I looked in the dictionary
I noe the closest match was right cuz ur rap needs a charity!
I'll even help you out..."All Donate to the Chrit Foundation"!
Maybe then u will sprout...and just might achieve elevation!
U elevate?!? haha Chrit...or wait...Name is wannabe Christ!
Names close to a great...to make up for ur truly pathetic life!
Dispite what ur record shows...ur rap like excrement...u turd!
vets will waste ur material...so u only drop shit with the herbs!
Petrafy and Aragon...ders the recent two just to name a few
Ur lames verses r repetitive...........Just like a parent...
...Who's playin peek-a-boo!
Saw ur thread in Bitch Slapped "a free win"...how could pass...
espically since ur pathetic like dem fat gurls......
...who swear they have ass!
 
Old 12-30-03, 11:48 AM   #5
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Bitching in EI about battles... here kiddo take notes...
You'll never win battling vets... and have a sig beggin for votes
Same shit they said last March... and you think now it'll harm me..
Shit you aint just wack in general... you're the whole damned army
Kids a g... but literally he cries when he says he's ballin...
Torn from those times he blew bubbles... or whatever dude made Payce call him
1-2? Shit kid... in the time ya here... ya skill has never grown...
I mean.. fuck you cant even fake dope... like a second rate methodone
So blah.... _______ fill in the blank.... meh... kids a dumbshit...
^Had to include a line like that just to match Payce's wit
 
Old 12-30-03, 11:52 AM   #6
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if you people keep this up, chrit will reach 100 wins by the end of today.

payce, those punches sucked. talkin bout christ...awful. you need some better punches, better flow.

chrit...good flow, good punches, good response...good good good.


vote: chrit


return the favor....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943
 
Old 12-30-03, 11:55 AM   #7
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ok kool heres the breakdown.............i don't wanna do a breakdown.....notable punches....

Same shit they said last March... and you think now it'll harm me..
Shit you aint just wack in general... you're the whole damned army
^good wordplay nice shit .....that prolly took the whole batle right there....

1-2? Shit kid... in the time ya here... ya skill has never grown...
I mean.. fuck you cant even fake dope... like a second rate methodone
^ another good punch very thoughtful..........

Payce you shouldn't battle chrit types quite yet try guys like technician and carsonjetx2 before you take on the 87-7 guys.....just a thought...........your most memorable line........


U elevate?!? haha Chrit...or wait...Name is wannabe Christ!
Names close to a great...to make up for ur truly pathetic life!
^ now look at the difference in the level of veteraness on the punches and honestly tell me you think you won............

vote...........chrit.........hit this up both of you no hate.....one...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102265
 
Old 12-30-03, 11:55 AM   #8
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V/ Chrit

This is where you newbies need to take crit down when he drops a shitty verse....like it was ight...but compared to a good chrit verse...this is childs play....

Payce nice try, but you had basically no witty punches....it was adequate but nothin more....Chrit won with better punches
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Old 12-30-03, 12:01 PM   #9
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dayum...well I guess dis is over. Thx for the battle Chrit...good luck on reachin 100. Anybody mind to break down my verse so I can know where I really sucked and where I actually came decent?

uppin
 
Old 12-30-03, 12:10 PM   #10
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i already voted but sure/......................................
What the hell does Chrit mean...I looked in the dictionary
I noe the closest match was right cuz ur rap needs a charity!
^would've been better without the A....its a 6/10 personal....
I'll even help you out..."All Donate to the Chrit Foundation"!
Maybe then u will sprout...and just might achieve elevation!
^ forced the multi....sprout is a whack ass word...2/10 punch..there is where you came whack if you were intrested..
U elevate?!? haha Chrit...or wait...Name is wannabe Christ!
Names close to a great...to make up for ur truly pathetic life!
^already told you this was your best punch.......7/10..lil played but eh......
Dispite what ur record shows...ur rap like excrement...u turd!
vets will waste ur material...so u only drop shit with the herbs!
^TURD??? <-----whackness......i'll give this line 3/10 at best...turd killed it.......
Petrafy and Aragon...ders the recent two just to name a few
Ur lames verses r repetitive...........Just like a parent...
...Who's playin peek-a-boo!
^ok your supposed to be rappin thats more like poetry..when you think peekaboo do you think rap...????........6/10
Saw ur thread in Bitch Slapped "a free win"...how could pass...
espically since ur pathetic like dem fat gurls......
...who swear they have ass!
^too simplistic if your going against chrit look at the vocab.....pass...ass...tough connection there.....6/10....
overall.....30/50 and i was nice.................one chrit poll your vote plz if you haven't already........gee thanx.....
 
Old 12-30-03, 12:24 PM   #11
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Lets get some more votes here...

2-0

 
Old 12-30-03, 12:28 PM   #12
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yea uppin...lets get this closed...I guess what you guys are sayin is dat I needa bigger vocabulary to compete at the higher levels of competition on this board and i need fresher punches lol. Dats what u get for writing raps about toilet paper before a battle. Alright...thx for the advice, lates.
 
Old 12-30-03, 12:53 PM   #13
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chrit-ok flow,ok disses,ok punches,tight opener

payce-ok flow,ok disses,u juss need to work on punches,and be more consistant


Vote:chrit
 
Old 12-30-03, 12:56 PM   #14
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can u please drop an honest vote on this i need 1 more honest vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101672
 
Old 12-30-03, 01:06 PM   #15
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I really liked the "general/army" line and really liked the "blew bubbles" line...

The rest was pretty eh.

Payce's shit sucked until the two last bars...

Which completely changed format (kinda like they were ghost-written)...

But I'm not accusing shit, just taking note of a style change.

So, in a way, this comes down to choosing between two bars in this battle...

And I liked Chrit's wordplay, humor, and punches better.

Close though...

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