10 Line Max
Due in 30 mins from now
No Crew votes
No D/R Votes
No feedin'
I'll spit first

checking in.....................................this biznatch.......................................... .................................................. ....................................

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YO POST-PONE THIS, I GOTTA GO TO WORK CUZ, I'LL SPIT WHEN I GET BACK ON LATA ON TONIGHT DAWG, I DIDN'T KNOW I HAD TO BE IN BY 12, HOLLA

^prewriter........
................................ok............i'll wait.....................................
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Prewriter? yo, i don't even need 30 mins to whip that ass cuz, fuqin' bitch.. Don't try me like that again, talk is cheap ova da net my nigga, lets do the damn thing

This niggah I Diminish, like me and tec with beef, easy to finish//
I equal bad newz, I'm like death at Tec's door, BombZ is like a device this technician has never delt wit before//
Restistance towards harm, still kill this cat if I was disarmed//
Something wrong with his flow as if I had him in head locks cuz his flow seems tangled and out of order as if it was n dreadlocks//
I run you like I run street-blocks, couldn't get no help from BombZ if u went through d-tox//
Cheap I'm not, thinkin' my verses are prewritten cuz theirClassics like Reeboks//
Cuz I'm deadly, Tec comes with over comfort when he see's cops//
Gonna get punished like snitches that be caught//(POP!))
Even if ya' heart consisted of a beat box, you still wouldn't be known as a technician, feds is gonna charge with polution when its ya' head I start splittin//
Ya' betta watch this battle, cuz I seem to be good-friends with addition//

You stretchin ya lines so far it's like you scared to fight
It's obvious i'm the only thing in this battle farenhieght
Ya verse is so long you remind me of a widescreen TV
Shit, after that post people askin' me "Why he emcee?"
You think you can win with complex multis and vocab
Bolding your only punches and structure thats so sad
I key'd a problem for you, adjust to tha fact that yo had
When you droppin' ya Bombz it's only light is a glow tab
You tried out for Lyrical Soldiers and even they reject you
You asked for this L, now to this punishment i subject you

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Flow = Tech
Structure = Tech
Punches = Tie
Entertainment = Tie
Close = Tech


Nice Battle


REPAY FAVOUR PLEASE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101304

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

opener tech
closer tech
punches tie
close tech
personal tie
overal tech

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personals- tech
punches- tech
structure- tech
meti4's- bomz
multi's- bomz
flo- tech
overall- tech

if bomz fixes that syle he will be tuff to beat...props to both...*1*

^polled wrong person.........................uppn............... .......it'll get fixed.................good battle bombz....................................

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personals- tech
punches- tech
structure- tech
meti4's- bomz
multi's- bomz
flo- tech

overall- tech

yup very clear here
BREAKDOWN-
punches-T
flow-T
structure-T
Enjoyment-T
metas-T
overall-T

Bombz you got that many battles under ya belt yet
you still have no flow n structure---->SORT IT LOL

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP...BEIN SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101388

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

personals- tech
punches- tech
disses- bombz
flow- tech
vocab- bombz
multis- bombz
creativity- tech

ai8ght thats a fuckin dope battle

winner- tech

return tha favour heree wit a honest vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=101359

peace