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Check in by: 02-11-06 at 07:43 PM

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"Fiasco" has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-06 07:45 PM.

Lil man real hyped up but i can tell he aint gon be off tha shelf
got potential but judging from da avy he rather make an ass of himself
Im not relly tryin that har but it's a fact i'll merk em anyway
Cuz he see Fi and it be like after christmas he'll put his Wraps away
He'll ask for help but he don't get it like a new car i'll wreck this man
Funny that he can't 'si' see me and this the dummy that sayin he mex-ican

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I'm back on the block like I'm layin on the street//
I'm tryin to stop lion/lyin like I'm Mum-Ra//
But I'm not lyin when I'm layin on the beat//
En garde, or touche', Lupe cool as the un-thawed//
But I still feel as posessed as a gun charge//-Lupe Fiasco

Mexican has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-06 07:56 PM.

hey dawg u had 3 days to perfect ur verse/
it wasnt off the top and still it is way worse/
dont feel hurt just go back to beatin ur meat/
dont come at me so weak this aint sesame street/
so dont talk shit or get mad, im only here to enlighten/
but u know what?take this pen stop flowing u stick to writing/

i hope ya'll like this verse

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upin this.......my verse was weak damn........but yea

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I'm back on the block like I'm layin on the street//
I'm tryin to stop lion/lyin like I'm Mum-Ra//
But I'm not lyin when I'm layin on the beat//
En garde, or touche', Lupe cool as the un-thawed//
But I still feel as posessed as a gun charge//-Lupe Fiasco

yo u all should really start votin.

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nice verse fiasco nice u too mexican im just checkin the pollz but mexican elevate a lil work on punches and personals

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Authentik Intelligence

Voted For: "Fiasco"

Vote- Fiasco

alright, not the greatest battle I've ever read, but Fiasco got it done. He had more direct punches, and was a lil more complex. Mexican just needs to get a lil more creative with his concepts, but not bad.

Flow- Tie. I didn't prefer one flow over the over, cuz they both had it structured alright.

Punches- Fiasco. He came harder, with some better concepts. Mexican threw some marginal punches that just didn't carry the venom that Fiasco's had.

Personals- Only 1 in this battle, and it came in Fiasco's last bar. Fiasco takes personals. Personals attached to a heavy punch can turn tides in close battles, remember that. Word.

Multis- Not a multi-heavy battle. A nice 3 syllable one appeared in Fiasco's last bar, so he takes it.

Wordplay- Not impressive from either cat. Fiasco had some cracks at wordplay, so he gets it.

Not a great battle, both catz were just alright. I'd concentrate on personals and word play, and try to put it with some heavy punches.
No hate, just some advice.

Oh, if ya could RTF and vote in my battles Antic vs. JC Real and Antic versus Rexless, that'd be cool.

~1~

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s

thanks on the feed man..........yea i kno my verse was a lil below average

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I'm back on the block like I'm layin on the street//
I'm tryin to stop lion/lyin like I'm Mum-Ra//
But I'm not lyin when I'm layin on the beat//
En garde, or touche', Lupe cool as the un-thawed//
But I still feel as posessed as a gun charge//-Lupe Fiasco

come on ppl. vote on this wucking battle..........

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Checking the polls.

hmmm im pretty sure thats freeposting but fuck it. votes!

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