you know the rule

no h c dr vote

explained votes

10 bars max..................

due by mid night my bad midnight detroit time to................................................ ...........................

damn the leangth has to be 100??? thats gay so how do i check in to a battle if i have to type a whole lot of shit to do so??? do you not have check ins here>?>?? sorry im new so dont try and go crazy on a brotha.. holla..

it dont matter if you check in i dont care just post up................................................ ........

no rapping off each others shit



Im like adam and eve but i was put on this earth to create raps/
this is ya first verse? without reading yo shit , you gonna collapse//
im so hot you need a thermometer to test~my~skill/
im a murder so i am aimming at the chest~to~kill//
you got about 1 hour 30 minets and 5 second till the outline~ya~chalk~line/
come towards me with ya bitch verses and youll met my nine~if~ya~nock~mine//
'everything' i do is 'obscene' you need 'caffenine' to stay up with me, cuz i will cut through ya heart and ya spleen/
always making a 'scean' you shit sukks i have 'forescean' it, im killing you and im only fourteen//
look now im down with nothing but my conclusion/
i aint spreewell but my words are excrution//

excrution- squeezing out by applying pressure

upping for your verse....,..,.,.,.,.,..,.......................... .................................................. ........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Your "Content" Is just as "Hard" as "Pepsi" is Willing to bring to tha Public
You are "Rapbattles" "Bill-O'Reilly", An Old "Fart" that just Couldn’t "Cut-It" *
Ya like "Jayz" U Found out ya "Album" Hit tha "Streets" and Decided ud Better-Post-Fast **
But Letting "Fran" go "Last" is just Like a "Thumb-Tact" Thats Gonna "Nip" you in the "Ass"
Now I have reach "Biblical Heights" with all the "Flows" I Re-sight
Ill Show this "King-The-Light", Only way you "Part" me is if you were "Jesus Christ"
Let me give you some "Advice", in order to be "Nice" you need to stay off my "Dick-n-Balls"
Cuz Ill show you no "Respect" at all N Piss all over you like "High School" Stalls
Fran Will "Rip-n-Snap" this Kid like "New-Born-Twigs", the way I’m "Breakin" This Win
Im "Bendin" ya "Limbs", The way you Already "Dick Riding" me, You Keep ya "Knees" on Bend


* You know about the thing wit Luda and Pepsi
** Jayz droped his album early cuz it hit the streets..

holla uppin for votes..

Ok bolth of yall need to elivate serously but I think tha fransinse took this one barly but both of your verses did not make sence at times but anyways Peace

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91698

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hummmmmmmm well i guess thanks for the vote....... uppin................. [ yall vote like crazy here.. :-/ but thats good ] holla..

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^dang.. battle fell off the first page in the first day.. uppin for votes.... plz vote guys

fran won this batlle he had better punches and better set ups. Good battle for a couple of newbies I say...

can you guys hit up this battle 4 me...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91122

p.s. franchise don't put your verse in bold it's very "newbie-ish"

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thanks for the vote.. yeah ill not do that next time.. uppin for more votes..

first line bogus
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l.c.^
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ok rest was decent
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l.c.^
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you had some good flow but u lack creativity
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l.c.^
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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line 6, y u saying he is a king?
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t.f.^
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line 8 wack
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t.f.^
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rest was decent
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yo ima have 2 say that t.f. got this
but both flows were pretty weak
both need 2 be more complex
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vote/ t.f. fo now
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hit it up
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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