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Old 01-03-04, 12:15 PM   #1
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Two Tracks

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First Song..
"Suicide Note"
i wrote this as an open mic so if you can find
it in open mic then you can read along to it.
the sound quality is off.. my vocals are too high.
we were basically just fuckin around. i do everything
on the song.

Second Song..
"Mindz Eye"
collab wit my boy Lyrical Graphiti.. he does the
chorus, i hit up the verses. beat provided by
noneedz.. only a rough copy

(still waiting for sum eq before we actually record
the final versions of the songs)


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Old 01-03-04, 07:33 PM   #2
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Old 01-03-04, 07:49 PM   #3
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Suicide Note=Beat Is Aite........Wow I Like The Begiinnning.......Ur Off THe Beat......Ur Sometimes To Loud On THe Mic........Voice Is Not For Rappin No Offense.....U Tried TO Fit To Much Words Sometimes...The Story Is Hot Though......Omg U Sound Like U Talkin Somtimes......Ok The Lyrics Was Hot.......Quality Was Bad...U Didn't Ride The Beat........And U Sounded Like U Was Talkin..And Voice Didn't Like It

Minds Eye= Beat Is Better.......The Lyrics Are Tite Nice Vocab......Your Loud Again.......U Rode The Beat Kinda Of Better But Still Needs Help.....The Chorus Was Trash No Offense......The Dude Sounded Wierd And He Was Sayin It To Fast.......


Overall=It Was Weak Cause U Didn't Ride The Beat...And Quality Was Bad As Fuck......But The Lyrics Are Hot So Overall 5.5/10

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Old 01-03-04, 07:52 PM   #4
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alright i checked your stuff out.....seems like your struggling hard to stay on because the lyrics were written more for a topical written...with some work something good can come out of it....production is in diar need..

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