aight around 5 bars..versess due in 45 after your checkin........

u accpeted so u spit first.........

Aight dawg checkin' in and spittin my verse. Check it:

What you hear is not always what it seem/
You in other niggas pants, given' head till they cream/
I'm like Freddy in ya dream, hittin' you with my lyrical beam/
You couldn't even scratch me if you used ya whole entire team/
Yo I'm done with this J-shook thug, let him outta my bear hug/

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Breakdancer in Brooklyn

Yo J you passed the deadline, but you got till the end of the day to spit. If ya din't I think you lose or sumthin' like that.

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

yea my bad dog..my parents kicked me off line last ngiht thats the dead truth....they are watchin me to c if im on this site lmao.............. when i get a chance i will drop 4 shore i never no show...................................

sry 4 it bein late.i keyed this in like 8 min......


i Illistrate, ways to KILL-n- wait, i read ur week verse...an YES "im still-awake/
THIS ways-fate, made my verse 3 days-late, vs. a fag in straight jacket who still ain't straight//(gay)
paked wit tons-of-jive, im sure to survive, battlin a cat thats "1 an 5"/
U can't STAND next-to-me, not even speak'n correctly, so wat makes u think that u can text wit me/
X MAS is here so end wit a ho ho, ur wins a no- go, this mad man is so damn bad i could beet him wit a no show/

Theres a 10 line minimum guys. Yall wrote like 5 lines not 5 bars. Jus lettin ya know. Have a good christmas ~1~

lol..... ne ways........votes please............................................ .................................................. ..

Jshook takes tjis. He had better Metas, personals, punches. Jshook ya gotta fix ya structure tho. Get rid of the //. Madman be mo creative with ya lines. PLease hit this up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101357

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jshook took this easily....betta punches and e'erythang....


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101318

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thanks..... but 4 real.POLE ur votes........peeps.c'mon........im really up by like 3............


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