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Old 12-26-03, 03:03 PM   #1
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Unhappy I guess Outlook?

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So you think you have everything undercontrol don't you
Well guess what?
Your outlook needs to change.
What you think is will never be the same all because...
Your outlook is about to cahnge
The time has come and the change is here
Your outlook is going to change
All the things bad bottled up inside, clamoring in your mind and
making you hide
All have to cease and go the other way because no matter what
Your outlook will change
A loving nurturing atmosphere will help you figure things out ease the pain and dought
To help the spirit grow and muture fully
So you may help someone else'e outlook change



Blah! from the top of my head too about a god 6 min. It sounds stupid to me. What do you think?

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Old 12-29-03, 10:55 PM   #2
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Old 12-31-03, 12:36 AM   #3
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I liked it. I really really did.

I mean, when reading that "Your outlook is about to change" line, I kinda was hoping this wouldn't be one of those "Oh look, the world around you aint really reality but just a mirage of reality to the extant that your perceptions perceive the falsivity to the point where it might as well be real even though it's not real" sort of writings... but it wasn't!

A loving nurturing atmosphere will help you figure things out ease the pain and dought
To help the spirit grow and muture fully
So you may help someone else'e outlook change


I especially loved that part. It's quite refreshing to see some positive thoughts being displayed here.

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Old 12-31-03, 12:45 AM   #4
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Umm im sorry did u spell "dought" wrong, if so i suggest the 1st grade 1luv.
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Old 01-01-04, 04:11 PM   #5
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^ ha ha....No you got jokes. I didn't even notice that I had a typeo....well I'm not fixing it so you
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Old 01-03-04, 10:24 PM   #6
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it was straight twin...but wait til you hear what i gotta say.
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Old 01-03-04, 10:29 PM   #7
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^ w/e twin uon
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