Last Collab Ever...See Ya All Later...

Sureal
You Wana Be Like Me, Half Crooked Hat..
Wana Jack My Steeze, Don't Look Back..
You Wana Write Like This, You Just Can't..
Wana Walk Like Me, So You Jack My Pants?..

*What The Fuck?..Gimme My Pants Back.!*

I Dont Act Hard, Or Try To Sound It..
Dont Look Far, Cuz You Just Found It..
Groups Of You, Rap Circles Around It..
Ya'll Think Of Me, When You Pound It..

*Ok Man... Thats Just Tooo Much Info..*

Yea Too Much Info, But Thats Shits Real..
Site Of Nymphos, Who Cant Match My Skill..
Lift Up Your Skirt, The Bitch Revealed..
LIKE OH MY GOD, Dont Hurt The Seals..

*I Think Sureals Fucked Up Again!!!*

Yea I'm Fucked Up, You Still Can't Match..
Saying "Please Instruct Us On How To Rap"..
Flip The 'Net-Hood', And You Start Falling..
You're Gone For Good, This Is "MY" Calling..

*Ring, Ring*

-Hello..

-Sureal, I Love You.. You're The ...

-*CLICK*

..I Don't Need Reassurance, Of My Skill..
You Best Have Life Insurance, Shit Turned Real..
Fucked Up Past The Point, Can't Speak Or Tell..
..Roll Me Another Joint, See You In Hell..


Whitelightning
Now Look At This Verse, It Seems Sureal
This Be The Time, You Truly Feel
New Shit Collab wit Sureal, No Speakin'
Got Hurbs Bustin Nuts, Trippin and Freakin'
Them Rushin' To Dickride, They Ain't In Single File
Funny How This Is Better Than Best, And It's Quickly Keystyled
I Double In Talents, Topical And Hardcore Punches
At Least I Rest, And Don't Spend All Of My Lunches
Should Undergo Name Change, From "Whitelightning" to "WEC"
Got Many Beggin For Lesson's, They Desire To Be Like Me
I Speak My Mind, Whether You Like It Or Not
I Don't Conform, Respect Has Never Been Sought
For I'll Gain It, By My Apparent Lyrikal Skill
For You'll Fail It, Your Wins Are Stuck At Nill
We Exstinguish Your Flames, No More Creative Fire
You'll Run Like Chrit, And Fuckin Retire
Easy Man, I Don't Mean To Come Across With Hate
But A Loss Is A Loss, Big Deal! Your Ninety Six 'n' Eight
I Come With A Story, No Convulded Images Or Record That Lures
But I Ain't Like The Rest, So It's Hated By Scriptures
I Could Sit And Give Multiple Reasons, Actin' All Tough
But You Bitches Know, You Wanna Be Just Like Us

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

Sureal...
Damn you must be annoyed at someone, cause this was a sure way to say Leave me the fuck alone.

..I Don't Need Reassurance, Of My Skill..
You Best Have Life Insurance, Shit Turned Real..
Fucked Up Past The Point, Can't Speak Or Tell..
..Roll Me Another Joint, See You In Hell..

Seems kinda personal.

WL...
Yea, so your pissed off too...but mostly just telling people to stop bothering you and stop trying to be like you... main suggestion would be to get the lines around even to get a better flow out of the piece

Good job gents, and as its obvious by both your sigs...this is good bye

Bye Bye

i thought it was okay..... i don't think it was all comlex, but it had some good punches..... i think whitelightings verse was a little better only because of the way the flow was...... i see it was personal and you had a good topic..... keep droppn'

YOUR A FUCKING IDIOT...PUNCHES?
DO YOU KNOW WHAT FLOW IS?

echo go away...fuck you...don't ruin this.

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

This was a really good piece, first time I seen work from Sureal and White, judging by the topic they both seem very upset at something. Sureal, you had really good flow, really easy to follow. I also felt the idea you were trying to get across. Very good work.
Now White, you did very well yourself. Your structure was a bit off. But your flow was there, so that I could feel.
Good collab and after reading the start its sad to see 2 such strong emcees leave.

This was a great piece despite Sureal's mostly simple rhyme scheme...

White Lightning definately picked up the slack with his verse...

Not that there was alot of slack that needed picking up...

He just added the vocab and complexity this needed.

Deep emotion, good anger, very bitter and resentful verse.

But real fuckin good.

9/10

Have I ever given anyone a 9/10?

I don't believe so, if I did, I hope it was at least this good.

Peace, my brother.

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