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Old 01-05-04, 07:47 AM   #1
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War On The Streets

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I know I said this before, but now it´s time for war.
When we roll down the street,
just whistle an my dawgs hit the enemy like a missle.
Let me go from this world, release me,
Cause Allah knows it ain´t easy.
Roll with me an i´ll make U see,
that Im a real Muslim MC.
It´s time for U to play ur part, so let´s make this shit start,
realize how to use ur mind, body an heart.
U gotta be ready to die, U know I got ur back,
an eye for an eye, just relax don´t cry, an don´t ask why?
Now this is a muthafuckin fact, so just grab ur gat an react.
Hit the next town, turn the shit up side down.

I keep Allah in my heart, try to follow my dien,
but shaitan got me chasing the green,
So when we hit the scene, bitchniggas scream.
Just keep god in ur heart, even though U get scared,
real muslims repesent, help out when U can´t pay ur rent.
Come on man, cool out, an pull ur hole crew out.
Run up on any block disrespect every cop,
they just wanna bust ur fun, thats why I bust my gun.
This is for the real Dollars, U know poppin collars on Rottweilers.
Im in this shit all the way, that´s why every night U hear me spray to get my pay.
Im in this shit to the full, like a ragin Pittbull.
Throw some love up, u still Thuggin or what,
Oh U don´t know my best freind just got shoot,
that´s why I pack the glock as i roll down my block.

War on the Streets will there ever be Peace....
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Old 01-05-04, 10:46 AM   #2
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Man its a good topic but, half the shit dont even rhyme man...
U need too elevate dawg
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Old 01-05-04, 11:10 AM   #3
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wasnt feeling this the flow was way off... ya lines didnt even rhyme..well most of them...you need to carry them further..... jus work on everything man...pZ....
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Old 01-05-04, 01:31 PM   #4
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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Old 01-05-04, 01:35 PM   #5
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war on the streets - true but you gotta admit dawg, kinda played..although you added a new aspect to it, with the religion theme, it kinda fell short...nah mean..vocab boy..VOCAB thats what this piece needed more than anything else, you add in more complexity, and it would have been dope...
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