I replied to : Antonio, Repin and Masta C


My existence is a manifest best represented by Tupac/
I got Hit with every bullet, but I'll recover from every shock/
I'd love to 'Cock a Leg' and piss on all that doubt me/
Always branded as the suspect..i suspect thats why I'm mouthy/
Lyrical genius..I'm the 'King' of rap but i lack the penis/
I post my rhymes in Braille, so the blind and deaf can feel this/
Truth I'ma Be the realist rapper to ever spray shit on a mic/
But the odds are all against me..

I'M FEMALE AND I'M WHITE!

Trapped in another life, i got as much future as Detroits car industry/
What I'm sitting spittin and dissin is iller than hepatitus B/
Every line that sprouts from my mouth is a bile pile of verbal sick/

WILL I BE THE ONLY MAINSTREAM RAPPER TO EVER SUCK A DICK?

Retort to liquor anythings quicker than waiting around for a record deal/
I'm like an Etheopian, praying to God for a slive of bread as a next meal/
When i grab the mic i have them in epileptic fits, a battle of wits,
To welcome them to the blitz/



summat to keep me busy, i was bored so dropped some quick random lines...enjoy....or not..

This drop was sick...... Way better than the other drops I rated for U...

7.6/10

U had good wordplay, perfect stucture and flowed well...

good job!!!!

Lyrical genius..I'm the 'King' of rap but i lack the penis

(I liked this bar the best, cuz it says ur the women champ. If U were a guy posting this I would be like WTF....LOL... NICE DROP)

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Mystic (Traitor)

thanks..it was just a boredom/anger diss, sick of being told that females don't belong in the rap game, like Eminem was told white people don't belong..now look at him, rap aint about creed or color its about rhythmn and poetry..i know it would be hard for me to make it..but its possible..and if i do i'll be all the more grateful..

Ok. Firstly it was a nice drop. However it could have been made more emotional.. instead of comparing it to Detroid Car indrustries. that shit is ok for a battle but when you spilling your feelings i wouldnt use it.

But your flow it oright. It was a nice drop just next time blend with it more. Express yourself through it.

anyways no hate. keep doing your thing.

If you have time return the fevour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103155

Yeah i agree this was a good drop.....enjoyed the read.....structure was good in this i thought.....your flow in this was good, it stayed on point through out the piece, never really got off....you had some good vocab i thought....you had some good wordplay....overall it was a good piece....keep at it.

this was ok. good to see there is no dick ridin here for this chick. i am sick of idiots big uppin chicks for trying, just cause they wanna score... losers. anyways,
i dont think your flow was very good, cause you lost the sick rhymin at the end of the second line. i can think of about fifteen better words to rhyme with 2Pac, other than shock...
keep elevatin, with no hatin...

peep my shit if you can...

ok thanks eveyone...