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Old 01-02-04, 01:26 PM   #1
Antonio Banderas
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Quick Keystyle TRY OUT VERSE

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The keys stuck in DEPRESSion like da 1940s
Left on a doorstep wit 4 teeth, Why did my mother abort me?
I been dealt the dealth hand without choosin my cards
Kinda of like I've been tossed crap hands the I was discard
Since my face was drenched in sadness, smiles never cracked
Door of oppurtunity shut on me, evertime I searched for rap
My life resemble a jigsaw puzzle, I gotta picked up da pieces
Since birth from mammass fecees, searching for living reasons
Sometimes I'm drunk of myself, I explore my corrupted visions
Peep duck me on rapbattles.com, so my lyrics stay imprissioned
Like hopital quizzes niggas testin my patience, grant me serenity
If ya feelin this keystyle, check out my drops....In short...PM ME
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Old 01-02-04, 01:59 PM   #2
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reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread or it gets deleted.
thanks.
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Old 01-02-04, 02:14 PM   #3
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I replied to like 11 drop post.... I cant remember the links or names, but I'll look for it....

K Frost
EKI
Lee Debe or LIla Debee (I think this is her name)
Rule

And I replied to several other drops... Cant remember it now...
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Old 01-02-04, 02:39 PM   #4
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This was a good drop.....original.


Flow and vocab were consistantly good here and you structured it pretty good.
To improve I woulda picked a more clear topic coz there wasnt one here. 8/10
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