12 to 16 lines max
first to five votes wins
three votes =KO
since you put out the chalenge your first
theres no deadline...if you have any problems with theses rules let me know....

post your verse in this thread




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Wordplay couldnt assocaite a verb with an adjective
running the shit outta this 'ass' like i was his coach feeding him laxatives
passive modes to corrode this tadpole like a baby toad
u couldnt be amphibious if i drowned u on concrete roads
So ure from anon? Is that so icant come get u?
and u sit their wid ure avatar thinking u scare me like u was tenchu?
this guy couldnt be ill if he caught the flu at the zoo
cos ima animal now tell me whats u gunna do?
Cursertive~Assertivness - My verses are merciless
and my rhymes a re tighter than a virgins perked cervix is
invade your thoughts like a dart to show '18' followed by 'naughts'
ill leave 'crosses' on your eyelids to mark the spot for terrestrial jugganaughts
chalk your face to make up the board with fakes
you couldnt be 'candyman' if u was made of sweets and was advertising chocolate cakes


Peace. . . . If no1 understands anything, shout bk n ill explain!

Come on u cock, that verse took me 15 minutes to write. . . just get a reply back u snidey biatch! You accpeted the battle, so the least u can do is reply u f00king eejut!

his names majestic, like the jim carrey flick..tearin' script so quick..it's in reverse rebuildin' it/
leave your text without a pulse..the way I'm killin' it, spillin' words all over boards..the mods all drowned in spit/
I'm wordplay for a reason..no point announcin' it...as of this verses post...R.B's denouncin' him/
attack and pouncin' kid's....shit I'll beat you down....with molded adjectives...chokin' you with bible passages/
skip a trial...tack you to a crucifix.....loosen limbs...shoe's and skin..are all but useless/
your verse just wasn't shit..I'm provin' it...you should've chose a lesser chalenger to boost your win's/
now your losin' this...his keyboard is booing him...there aint a chance in A.O.L...you'll have respect again/
after this..I expect your death...there's still time to pull your verse....I'm recommendin' it/
watch my verse burst...and burn words...the worst beating since fan's attacked fred durst/
aint nobody stoppin' the knockin'....I'm beatin' you so bad...your in endorsement talks with Johnson n johnson/
my mind is the maze..that your lost in... I'm .droppin' more emcee's...than the average porn star does condoms/
now look at the masacarre you landed in...this chalenge is so lop-sided...It's like me and you ain't battlin'/
was there any doubt...majestic would die now?....fallin' faster than anyone on 9/11 decidin' to jump out/
I'll take your shoe's..so you can't run your mouth....I killed you so fast.....do they really need to vote now?/

here ya go you impatient fuck.......ya'll can vote now...

uppin for votes

don't sleep on this ya'll

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wordplay you had better structure and prolly everything else. this was a very weak battle though.keep elevatin both of ya's.

yo this was pretty wack, but i think poison takes it.

structure - wordplay
opener - wordplay
flow - wordplay
enjoyment - wordplay
closer - wordplay, fo sho

overall vote: wordplay

soz. wordplay takes it. was pollin on another battle............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...........

thanks for the vote...still uppin for votes

c'mon ya'll..................

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uppin for votes

don't sleep on this ya'll

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don't sleep on this ya'll

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WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!

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stop ignorin' this battle

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vote vote vote vote vote vote

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Safe for vote manz. . . still uppin!. . . . But peeps remember, he had 7 hours, i took 15 minutes . . . and it showed. i was hoping for a very qwik KEYSTYLE battle, but it seems like u all like to go heavy, so jus watch for me name. . . . . . . . . . . . .