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Old 01-03-04, 07:53 PM   #1
True-Souldja
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In or Out of Controll???

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-Technician- - Truth Is...
s.R. - Drinkin Liquer Out of a Chalice
billy - some shit

Just a perplexed man representin intentions wit nothin left,
Feels like livin in different dimensions as I summon death,
No need to let them push me cause I got weed,
End up sendin em the wrong way at top speed,
Turns out bein a long day for those tryna drop me,
Drugs flowin Im knowin I got info that the cops need,
Laugh as I realize these guys hidin something tense,
Eye contact as I laugh and jump they fence,
My contract is wacked It makes no fuckin sense,
So I dont use it, hand it to the man found humpin dents,
Violence my second choice when dealin with them,
Same goes for mothafucka's tryna steal my rythem,
Ill never be a criminal thats just concealed in prison,
Justa crazy mothafucka makin the real decisions,
Walk with my head up cause I can be proud,
Aint a thief but Ill keep what it is that we found,
I aint talkin bout weed when I say three pounds,
Aint in controll on drugs becuase now I see clowns,

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Check it out and let me know what you think
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Old 01-03-04, 08:16 PM   #2
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Pretty Decent Drop Man..You Seemed To Go Off The Topic At Times But You're Flow Was Hella Nice Man...I Was Feeling It Alot Cho..You Didn't Have Any Quotables In This Though, But It Was Still A Nice Drop..
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Old 01-03-04, 08:39 PM   #3
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thanks for the feedback bro I keep all critisism in my head so that all it is that I can do from there is improve, Recognize that shit people or be prepared to go nowhere.
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