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Old 01-04-04, 12:34 PM   #1
Rural Thug
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Casket Filla

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I am a guy who fills those caskets
I see them in my sight and drop 'em like targets
Pin point precision, i hit them wit bad shit
With my 9 mill by my side, Im not afraid to take hits
Cos i'll hit them straight back wit some bad ass flows
Make the heart beat when it comes and breaks their nose
Then paralyses them wit my pitch from high to low
Maybe blind them with my lighting blow
Finally when your standing still
I might have the decency to finally kill
What should i do, pop you a pill
Watch you froth at the mouth complete my thrill
I dont know, how do i decide?
Shall i watch you die from cyanide?
Do you want me to drown you in an incoming tide
Or maybe take you for a heart rushing joyride
These decisions i have to make to complete your death
Take away your final,choking and lifeless breath
Watch the finalising rise and fall of your chest
Then put you on my tally like all the rest
Im not cold hearted, i just do it for the cash
I dont really care if you suffer and dont last
I consider every target as shit and trash
Im not one of those murderers who hits and dash
I take my time, make sure the job is done
Then when i complete i reload my gun
I dont consider my job as a gangsta run
All it is, is cash and fun


Cos im the casket filla,
Red hearted, cash full killa
End with evenings with my bitch and filla
Full of my shit and then i tella
Baby's achin, please make me betta
She gets going and of course i let her


She does her stuff, i believe its very good
I treat her well, just like i should
She's the best catered for bitch in this hood
My life is like very much a rise
A rise to fame in my eyes
A lot of people hate and despise
But im not bad, i dont tell lies
Or cheat on my girl wit a bitch ass ho'
I just keep killin, comply wit my roll
As a cash killa, collecting my toll
And everyone gotta know


Cos im the casket filla,
Red hearted, cash full killa
End with evenings with my bitch and filla
Full of my shit and then i tella
Baby's achin, please make me betta
She gets going and of course i let her


Some say i should finish and quit
Settle down and stop this murderin shit
But i enjoy it, i like the money and thats it
But can i offer and give you a tip
Leave your views to yourself
I wont even look at you even if you top shelf
I hope you die of disease and bad health
Or shall i kill ya' usin secrecy or stealth
There are some people i kill for hate
And for you my son, i have decided your fate
Im gonna kill you, even without a pay rate
Your destiny is decided, im sorry but its too late
This time its not because of my occupation
Its basically cos of my anger and aggrevation
I really hate your moms and dads creation
I would love to spit on you when you set for cremation
You deserve to die, cos of your temptation
Tryin to steal my wife, those pathetic accusations


Cos im the casket filla,
Red hearted, cash full killa
End with evenings with my bitch and filla
Full of my shit and then i tella
Baby's achin, please make me betta
She gets going and of course i let her


See ya later



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Old 01-04-04, 02:17 PM   #2
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Flow is a little off in this writing.... The vocab is also limited cuz millions of people drop this type of writing per year.... U really need to try to put some nice wordplay in this writing.... I think wordplay will make all the difference in this piece... Dont worry about multi usage, because I think multies might mess up the flow in this piece....

Also, it seems like U were just rhyming words... U gotta work on tryna use some of the elements that CHRIST (98-6 record) posted.....
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Old 01-04-04, 07:02 PM   #3
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You didnt leave feedback on the links you left....Closed.
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