Johnny 6-feet: Doorway of time
Dialektz: internal waves (keystyle)
Katz. Frost: dipset anthem(ill freestyle)

this is the 3rd part of a text series of story verses that I started 2 years ago...I have part 2 on my comp...part 1 is lost somewhere on the net lol...it was my favorite too...anyway here's the 3rd part, I have never posted it online before so I'm looking forward to the replies...


I woke up, feelin so sick, I felt myself fall into the pit//
rippin the spits when I picked up the mic how I saw fit//
tellin a story that's bloody n gorey, from my days of glory//
will u listen, for me..iight saturday night it started storming//
lightning bolts jetted like a chicken beheaded in armageddon//
it was my honeymoon but we already fucked at the weddin//
the storm was so bad I could see clearly even tho the lights were out//
when the lightning flashed I saw her ass, then I heard her shout//
looked down n saw blood pouring out of her mouth//
oh my god, I screamed as I saw this man sitting on the couch//
I'm screaming at the top of my lungs, my wife lying on the floor//
but nobody will help, because of the do not disturb, sign on the door//
I'm crying once more, as a man with dreadlocks stares me in the eye//
he already took her life n now he's got me against the wall with the butcher knife//
n the only thing I can think of is how I didn't even get a nut when I fucked my wife//
this guy tho, was about 6 feet tall, with arms the size of pythons//
he said somethin that shook my spine, "the line, is what ya lifes on"//
he said that I stole his woman, but I've never met this guy//
but I could see the hate and a hint of fear when I looked in his eyes//
then i remembered, took away the black clothes n his new hair//
think about school, fuck yea, I remember this dude from there//
where he was kinda a nerd, I thought this was absurd//
how could he be with my bitch? in breathless words//
I think about it, maybe it's his bitch, my bitch don't exist//
or maybe it's not a bitch it's a kid with a dick that couldn't resist//
my thoughts raced as he had his shank against my face//
the blood trickles down..."yea mutha fucka how does that taste"//
with each taunting word I feel another cringe, n another balled fist//
this is all shit, I neva saw this, appalled, it's exactly what I'd call it//
with all my power I shoved him into the opposing wall and hit his head on the door//
I musta cut somethin cuz his blood began to pour as he fell n hit the floor//
he stood up quickly tho, but tried to hit me slow, I ducked, he hit the flo//
again, his skull is open, the artery right above his right eye is broke//
I held him against the glass, he looked at me n said my wife was a nympho//
I snapped, then snapped his neck n pushed him outa the 10th story window........

lemme know how feel it...

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<--- begining to remember why I don't like this site...my shit is on page 2 after less than 24 hours, yet it has NO replies...not even from the people that I replied to....zzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

peace

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Its Been Their Cause You Haven't Droped You're Links Man..

Anyways, This Was Pretty Tight Peice..Flow Needs A Bit Of Polishing Here And Their..But Hey Who Dosen't Have Flawz ..You Seemed To Strech Bars At Some Places But Thats All Good Man..I Was Really Feeling The Concept That You Wrote Too..It Was Madd Nice With Nice Lines At Times..Too Lazy To Quote Them Though..Peep The Cypher I Made Rapid..Oh Yeah, Maybe We Could Do Sumthin In The Future..

^ werd...I'd be down...I've gotten better since I wrote that..I wrote that back in like...April or May...it's an audio track but it didn't flow really well so I scratched the audio...it was just the newest story track I have...I'll post part 2 soon...they don't go in order or anything, they're all seperate stories...so it won't make a diffrence if u read em out of sequence...

btw I can't post links...my comp won't let me paste a lot of things...especially on this website...that's why I just put the names of the songs..

peace

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you goddamn bastards

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