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01-09-04, 04:28 PM | #1 | |||||||
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The Chosen 1
IP: FA08 169D
he enters as the chosen one
who can physcially glow though speak lies 2 and fro words convergin like crossin sea's implement his every thought as he flows the one who is one with his soul and clearly knows what he feels vibes cool mentally moves as the atoms in chills the inner signs he see's his darkness he thoroughly shattered he's shook at the immense love that he breathes knowledge surround him as he already has it don't matter the one that obtains the psyche 4 word pure enough 2 open up to learn from heaven but can he live with no sex has no purpose from what he heard a reverend sent 2 teach with a hook in his voice restorin faith in perfection the globe surrenders no choice his existence consists of mind benders he stole back from the demons that took em he claimed his vengence rejoice n*gga he finnally has his vision back kept usin his heart his past never lookin at it
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Ya shit is no competition like 'trucker hats' against some 'fitteds' nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol none yall niggas wanna see me... |
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01-09-04, 05:05 PM | #2 | ||||
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..you suck!!!..you can't be the 'chosen1~~~~
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01-09-04, 05:06 PM | #3 | |||||
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,,nah~~this was oaky~~ |
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01-09-04, 05:36 PM | #4 | ||||||
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I thought this was good. I liked the way u described everything and the feeling put in it. Overall, good job. Keep it up
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01-09-04, 05:47 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: FA08 169D
hold up. In no way did I say "I" was the chosen one. I'm just expressing what he or a she is in my own words. Don't get what I said twisted, I'm far from chosen. Just enjoy what I write thats all I want you to do. Its cool penskills, but don't take my poems out of context unless what I say actually implies what I you think I mean. I gotta stray away from further explaination cuz I'm busy. thanks and enjoy.
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Ya shit is no competition like 'trucker hats' against some 'fitteds' nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol none yall niggas wanna see me... |
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