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ight chekin in...good luck dawg.......................................(50 characters long shyt)

lets do it keyin............................................. .................................................. ...........

verses due in 15 minutes or you are DQ'd,............................................. .......................

AIYO...Chek It...

~ { Warm Up } ~

i Rip Ya Flesh n Split Ya Chest In Two so next time ya boyfriend trys to bang its like fuckin Seperate Boobs\\

son, with a name like that, what tha fuck u tryin Prove? u think u "underrated" cus in ya dreams ur better dude\\

~ { MuRd3r } ~

this kids a fukin "joke" thats y im droppin my verse so Half-Assed, cus lyk digestin "lillies" this kid got L's comin out his Ass-Crack!\\

u couldn't be "on top" if u fucked a Tall Bitch, i ryhme wit Raw Spits that'll make ya Jaw Flip when i take tha revolver and empty out All Six\\

bitch better run when my Barreta Draws cus its Hella Strong, kid u simply not flowin like a bitch on Metapose\\

~ { FiNiShEr } ~

i got this shit down like i got u shackled cus kid i just ripped u n ur mom a new ass hole\\ (dats rite! !!)

our names colliding in a battle tells the outcome for you UnKoNSHuntZ..
the only time your sick with thoughts is when your home sick and thats just nonsense...
i'm bout to SHun this kOn Artist though i use the term artist lightly...
your O and O wait till you get to the Lethal Lyricist League to fight me...
this kids unknown his first post was excepting my callout in bitchslapped....
takin the same played ass avy kickin the same old bit chrit rap...
ok so you took the fact you deserve a double L and you put me all up in it..
Kid your searchin for ILL so heres a cup go in the stall and piss in it...
prolly a vet with an alias who couldn't stand to look at his record in the mirra..(mirror)
prolly spit it like lil john and the east side boys son thats my main fear for ya....
it used to be to a get a sig you needed some experience now any herb can get it..
and i was nice to you cuz, cause with a 1 hour timelimit you can pre write and spit it..

alright i'll upp it first then peace out............................................... ................................

Muties - ILL KoNsHuNtZ had the better multies.... More Rhymes

Flow - Theunderatted - he had the more even bars in the battle

Punches - Theunderatted came stronger with the punches. The Ill Konhuntz punches did not directly connect

Wordplay - Theunderatted had the better and more creative wordplay. Ill Konhuntz just said stuff people say daily.

Structure - The underatted had the better structure as well.

I vote theunderatted in this battle. Ill Konhuntz needs to work on some better material and even out his bars.....

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Mystic (Traitor)

I didn't like this battle at all.....
ILL- ur style is wak...change it an kill the stretched lines...u came way too stretched here...also ur wordplay was played....not many punches eithere....
overall I give u like a 2.0/5.0
UNDER- Ur style was hella streched also....say what u gotta say in half of what u got there....U'r punches were ok...but the flo weakened' them....U had OK wordplay....it wasnt too played, I've seen u drop better than this...fix ur style
overall I give u like a 3.5/5.0

still bad verse but u take this one.....vote UNDERRATED

lol, ight man u can have this battle i came way to weak...gotta admit that i thought u were gonna suck cus of ur record but i shouldnt have underestimated...

~1~

underrated took this althoug this battle wasn't very strong, under had decent punches and personals, wordplay was okay and kon you have potential but your verse is all over the place, fix ya structure so it doesn't look so noobish

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flow----------i gotta give to Underated--cuz it wasn't as choppy and streched as Ills
Punches----i give to Underated-------he had harder hittin ones
Metas and multis----i give 2 Ill---thats more my styles -but he had nice ones
personals ------really a tie
structure i give 2 -------Underated--cuz his shit wasn't so damn stretched-- if ya gunna strech make it work--instead just tryin 2 squezze another word that rhymes

so my vote ---Underated

thanx for the votes uppin to close this.............................................. .................................

Ill got the flow, multi's...
Nice work for a fucked up h~er-b*ish// format.

Punches were kinda ya downfall...
Mostly played concepts, not enough wordplay ta make em "wow".
The "separate boobs" was ok, everything else was eh.

Underrated didn't flow as well...
Lines were stretched some.
But the punches came together much better.
And there was more of em.
Some ok personals as well.

Change that flow, man...
Aside from that...

Win: Underrated

Peace

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