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Old 12-25-03, 07:29 PM   #1
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10 lines max
30 mins max..afta check in
house rules blah
no feedin etc
g'luck pz
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Old 12-25-03, 07:31 PM   #2
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checking in with the win ....
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Old 12-25-03, 07:33 PM   #3
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check in ..................
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Old 12-25-03, 08:01 PM   #4
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damn..Sand is real Quick lol..this bitch wasn't even Noticed...

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checking in with the win ....


acting like he's Near the Win..fuck..you being Sonned is Closest
he can't get in an Inch of this..like Reaching out w/ Stumps..
..if Wackness came out in Lumps..Sand would have the Mumps
wow..Sand is an "Old Vet"..well its Time to Draw ya Pension..
..see OAP'S are Glorified here..but your name dint get a Mention
I detest Fakes like you..Rare appearances given out the Blue..
..noone Realises that you're on..so if you Leave..Its Coo'
Fuck it..I'm expectin a Votin Ring around U..coz your an ass-Hole..
..you Blind n ya Dug yaself a 6 Foot Hole...
.........................................looks like this Hoe jus became a Mole lol
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Old 12-25-03, 08:07 PM   #5
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keystyled ..

i'll battle you for shits n' giggles .. like retards w/ bowels movin
i won't bloody your rag .. if you'd just throw in your towel stupid
run with a malice blueprint .. ready fire ...... then aim and kill ..
if balanced means talent ..you got bloody knees n training wheels
i word original concepts while you word venereal nonsense ...
and i'll mess ya up pussy! ... like defective vaginal contracepts ...
there's one thing i envy of you, n' its your own self appreciation
"content with the shitty things in life" is proof your complacent ..
but hey kid, being detained sucks .. so detained probably sucks
treat your ass like these herpes sores n' order you off my nuts ..
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Old 12-25-03, 08:26 PM   #6
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V/ sand

B.I you came well....you tried to have some witty concepts, but i think your wording lacked, you seemed to struggle....your best lines

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damn..Sand is real Quick lol..this bitch wasn't even Noticed...



acting like he's Near the Win..fuck..you being Sonned is Closest

I detest Fakes like you..Rare appearances given out the Blue..
..noone Realises that you're on..so if you Leave..Its Coo'
lol


Havent seen sand battle in a while and you came really dope, some very funny concepts that included hard punches.....my favourites

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keystyled ..

i'll battle you for shits n' giggles .. like retards w/ bowels movin
i won't bloody your rag .. if you'd just throw in your towel stupid

there's one thing i envy of you, n' its your own self appreciation
"content with the shitty things in life" is proof your complacent ..
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Old 12-28-03, 05:12 PM   #7
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B.I sucked IMO

Sand won easily.


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Old 12-28-03, 05:32 PM   #8
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B.I sucked IMO

Sand won easily.


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Old 12-28-03, 06:32 PM   #9
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Nope, he just won. Easily.


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Old 12-28-03, 06:42 PM   #10
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Old 01-02-04, 12:01 AM   #11
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i'm upping this ....
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Old 01-02-04, 02:44 PM   #12
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Nice Drop From You Both, But I Agree With Tak, Sand Had Some Funny Lines, LoL, His Opener Was Dope, Sand Had Harder Punches And A Tad Better Structure But BI Had Some Good Personals But None Really Hit That Hard

Punches - Sand
Personals - B.I.
RhymeScheme - Sand
Structure - Sand
Vocab - Tie
Wordplay - Sand

Yeah Sand Takes This Just For Having Better Punches And Wordplay, B.I. Had Some Good Shit But Sand Just Dropped Better, Honest Opinion.. Think You Two Can Check My Battle With Happ E. Thoughts
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Old 01-06-04, 12:57 PM   #13
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love ya brix
but sand came dope as
hell, seems he's gotten
better. He really ripped u
and your last line was trash.

vote - sand
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Old 01-06-04, 04:21 PM   #14
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lol..yea
i read over it
a million times
and its poo
thanx 4 votin pz
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Old 01-09-04, 10:33 AM   #15
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Sand does have the harder hitting stuff here...

And the better wordplay.

BI took the opener, Sand definately took the closer.

Multi's were obviously Fue's...

But I think the gappy thing up top fucked your opening flow...
At least for me it did.

So I'll give that to Sand.

(pretty sure I've seen that bloody knees and training wheels line somewhere???)

But regardless, Sand did take this with better flow, better wordplay, and punches that hit ta hurt.

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