aight you know the rules

20 minutes to spit

checking in......

check in you or me frist............................................. .............................................

shit i ll go frist............................................. .................................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104792 yo man i need this shit really closed so be cool and come vote peeps and i will make sure to vote for this honest

gazeebo that ware i fucked your fat hoe had her up all night screaming palmetto
oh no i jest didnt ...thruth is wasnt me it was my dog that did it
dont get mad i just kid... it realy was cack head doing a up sate bid
with rap so weak sounds like you grew up on sesame street
out come of this battle you leaving in defeat
walking the lonely mile.... hit me up later dog just get a new style
to bad this shits is over tell your girl to call if she wants rover

dam hit reply before i was done oh well its weak shit any way............................................... .................................................. ...........

Its like I swallowed a Flame Thrower Cus I Always Spit Fire/
Seen Ya add in the paper askin "Is there A Ghost Writer for Hire?"/
Ya style is wack ur never gonna get to mine/
and after this battle is over ima have u looking red and white, like the neighborhood stop sign/
You even contending wit me is just a dream/
Cuz im just like alcohol, i get in ur bloodstream/
The way Im cutting up ya lines, Its like im staring in Pulp Fiction/
Tell ya sister to shave her pussy, my dicks burning from the friction/
You really suck my ryhmes burst at you like they were magnetic/
Stop slappin bitch....oh its was a punch? THATS PATHETHIC/

Palmettos Verse:
gazeebo that ware i fucked your fat hoe had her up all night screaming palmetto
oh no i jest didnt ...thruth is wasnt me it was my dog that did it
dont get mad i just kid... it realy was cack head doing a up sate bid
with rap so weak sounds like you grew up on sesame street
out come of this battle you leaving in defeat
walking the lonely mile.... hit me up later dog just get a new style
to bad this shits is over tell your girl to call if she wants rover

^...Very Very lame verse....Most of this shit did not rhyme at all...And then to break it down all the way...(Dont let me get into it).....it was nothing but gay jokes...Come on!

Gazeebos Verse:
Its like I swallowed a Flame Thrower Cus I Always Spit Fire/
Seen Ya add in the paper askin "Is there A Ghost Writer for Hire?"/
Ya style is wack ur never gonna get to mine/
and after this battle is over ima have u looking red and white, like the neighborhood stop sign/
You even contending wit me is just a dream/
Cuz im just like alcohol, i get in ur bloodstream/
[]bThe way Im cutting up ya lines, Its like im staring in Pulp Fiction/
Tell ya sister to shave her pussy, my dicks burning from the friction/[/b]
You really suck my ryhmes burst at you like they were magnetic/
Stop slappin bitch....oh its was a punch? THATS PATHETHIC/

^....Very good flow...Very simple to read....Good punches....And this is by far a better verse than his...Multis came good..Then the favorite line that killed it is in bold. LOL witty..

My vote goes to Gazeebo...

Peep these battles and return the favor...SOrry no hate man Just a honest vote..I took time on your battle...U should do the same.

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