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peep and give honest feedback holla atcha boii

coo voice.......I like this beat, I used it before......you use a real basic flow........alot of people like that, I don't, It's like a three six mafia style.........lyrics was coo....hook was aiight........production was average........overall this was aiight..........I jus dont like the rhyme structure.....stay upppppppp......hold upppppppppppp.....listenin to the last verse now.......fa sho three six mafia influenced,lol......nice twistin u threw in there........song woulda been betta if u mixed that into the whole song instead of jus the end of it

yea i hear u. appreciate the feedback tho my guy. holla atcha boii

quality's horrible.... flow @ the start wat off a bit but u caught up... i dno, it is a real simple structure... u do it well, mainly, 'cause ya lyrics is coo... pretty deep ya know... but yo, peep my ish... it right under yours.

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eh...this shit was arite...quality was poor, like every1 else said flow was basic & 2 me ure lyrics were the same...only certain people can make that style werk...hook was coo....i mean this isnt shit...u juss needa git another beat & try again ya feel me?

stay steady wit ure flow


CIN

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Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre

it aint shii??? damm my guy that damm near sound like u takin a jab at me or suttin. but anyways its coo. i appreciate all the feedback and i aint got no problem with returnin a favor. but i jus like to keep my shit simple like A B C's its that 7 dollar mic also thats fukin up the quality. but yea anywayz holla atcha boy

lol aye dogg...i didnt mean ure musicc succz..i meant it juss how it was IT ISNT SHIT im sayn its not garbage its good juss not tha best...i didnt mean it like "oh ure shit aint shit, im harder" u kno?

juss clear that up rite there


CIN

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J.Cin aka JJdaBABAY
THE A-TEAM/MONEY HUNGRY
www.soundclick.com/JCin6one9


Droppin June 1, 2004
Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work"
(The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap)
Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more...
Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre

oh lol right on my guy. i mean its coo i wasnt trippin but right on for clearin that up. much respect holla atcha boyy

ewww at quality....but i have it on lo-fi...arrghh maybe its me...but i dont like dudes singing less they on some r and b shit....alight though...u sound pretty tighy....brb ill finish later....

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