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Old 12-11-03, 10:23 AM   #1
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Adolescent Me

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Adolescent Me - Mainstream Keystyle ft Big G.

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And i'm Living the life of an adolescent teen/
tryna make it through life on my own,not in a team/
people always askin why tha hell are you so like me/
that's coz we're both livin life as an adolescent teen/

West.

Adolescent me,is the same as an adolescent you/
same shit happen to me,same shit happens to you/
so fukin true,that life don't be payin change/
livin life estranged things jus stayin tha same/
people are slayne,the majority just don't know/
declarin westy's another foe another adolescent tryna flow/
so should i go,no,should i stay yea coz maybe today/
my mum and dad will treat me in humane way/
and pay me with the respect that an adult should get/
not sayin u don't pay any bills so ur not an adult yet/
i bet there forgotten what bein a teen is all about/
thoughts beatin at ur skull wantin to break out/
i want to scream and shout,releasin my agression/
went from no worries to school to work so much progression/


Hook -

And i'm Living the life of an odolescent teen/
tryna make it through life on my own,not in a team/
people always askin why tha hell are you so like me/
that's coz we're both livin life as an adolescent teen/

Big G.

Cause we just adolescents tryna live out day to day/
no fukin attention,noone listens to what we say/
too young to do this shit and far too old to play/
we gotta stand up no more beefing,fuck that no way/
coz if somethin goes wrong we're to blame by society/
but we didn't do shit,don't know bout you but not fukin me/
we goin through fuked up changes alot of shit an all/
but we gotta keep our head up,gotta stand up tall/


West. (Switch)

And bein a teen isn't bout pickin up a gun/
bein on tha run or how many battles you've won/
feelin stunned tryna to figure out who i am/
a student, a thug, no i don't have a masterplan/
and i can't tell you how to grow up and be a man/
all i can say is who you are is same as what i am/
and we stand together as the future of tha world/
a clambshell and a pearl,but on my own i'm in a swirl/
so fuck tha world,what does it ever do for me/
drag me under drown me,leavin me all at fukin sea/
and i'm westy a guy who's just tha same as you/
so open your mind and give me a safe passage through/

Hook -

And i'm Living the life of an odolescent teen/
tryna make it through life on my own,not in a team/
people always askin why tha hell are you so like me/
that's coz we're both livin life as an adolescent teen/

Links -

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97299

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97973

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97973

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Old 12-11-03, 10:27 AM   #2
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i liked it...i thought it all flowed welland you both had good multies.the topic is a good idea too.alot of us teens feel that way.its very relatable.good job keep that shit up.
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Old 12-11-03, 10:28 AM   #3
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Mad props here...
west- the first verse was on topic, flowed well, had nice vocab,
and all... very nice...
your second verse, you kindly changed your style and it helped
keep me into it... your shit was definately straight on this...

Big G- your little verse played a big role, by mentioning the fact
that its always the youths fault that everything goes wrong... props on bringin this up.

~AshY~
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Old 12-11-03, 10:50 AM   #4
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Appreciated!
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Old 12-11-03, 01:14 PM   #5
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Uppin.

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Old 12-11-03, 01:29 PM   #6
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Old 12-11-03, 01:30 PM   #7
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i liked this thought it was tight and a lot of truth being spoken, keep this shit up

hit my rhyme wen i drop it cheers
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Old 12-11-03, 01:39 PM   #8
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Will do.

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Old 12-11-03, 02:38 PM   #9
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Old 12-11-03, 02:45 PM   #10
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Old 12-11-03, 03:29 PM   #11
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Will do.uppin.

peace
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Old 12-11-03, 05:16 PM   #12
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Old 12-11-03, 06:05 PM   #13
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Sleepers out there !

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Old 12-12-03, 10:03 AM   #14
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Anyone ?
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Old 12-12-03, 10:13 AM   #15
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That was some A+ shit dude keep that shit up cause ppl need to feel that shit.Flow was good and the structure was good too dog,
Keep hustlin for props.and yo check out my battle wit blend. i can't put a link right now but its on the second page.


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