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Old 01-09-04, 06:53 PM   #1
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advice 2 a burning soul

IP: FA08 169D

I see that your souls hurtin
burnin
smokin opens your lungs up for demons
they've succeeded
now the darkness is certain
seems to me
your a rebel force ridin the breeze
with hot coals under your feet
you need it igloo cold
get those old flames out your souls home
so would you rather freeze over?
than burn in a chamber
you bleed at your own leisure
but tragedies is where you get seizures
from always livin life on your knees
get up and attack with wisdom
raise up with your vision
never stray away n if you never mend them
you never end them
your problems
don't lob them
or else you'll extend them
f*ck cryin just solve it
don't ask god 2 be involved in it
do it yourself
got it goin?
if so open the mind
pull out the wealth
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Old 01-09-04, 08:05 PM   #2
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IP: FA08 169D

hey penskill i was gonna ask if I could add this poem as a collaboration with you, but I didn't bother to ask. Your poem was intreguing and tight so I had to write my own.
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